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Your submission at Articles for creation: PARTNER trial (May 12)

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Hasteur (talk) 14:27, 12 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]


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Hello! Euroarti, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Hasteur (talk) 14:27, 12 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, User:Euroarti/PARTNER trial

Hello Euroarti. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "PARTNER trial".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. C679 19:51, 20 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

SPA /COI

Looking at your contributions, your account is what we call a WP:SPA (please read that) and you may have a conflict of interest with regard to the subjects you have written about.

Information icon Hello, Euroarti. We welcome your contributions to Wikipedia, but if you are affiliated with some of the people, places or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest or close connection to the subject.

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Would you please declare any relationship you have with the subjects you have written about? Thanks Jytdog (talk) 05:40, 18 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Euroarti you are back to editing today, and you have not responded here. I am hoping you will be reasonable and talk here so we don't have to escalate this - would you please respond? thanks. Jytdog (talk) 15:48, 19 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Euroarti you are back to editing today, and you have not responded here. please reply. Thank you. Jytdog (talk) 13:47, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Notice of Conflict of interest noticeboard discussion

Information icon This message is being sent to inform you that there is currently a discussion at Wikipedia:Conflict of interest/Noticeboard regarding a possible conflict of interest incident in which you may be involved. Thank you. Jytdog (talk) 05:53, 18 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

License tagging for File:Simultaneous left ventricular and aortic pressure tracings.png

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Problems with upload of File:Edwards SAPIEN XT transcatheter heart valve.png

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Issues

  1. Some of the images you have uploaded have copyright issues such as the one from here [1]
  2. We also have an article on aortic stenosis which is more or less than same as aortic valve stenosis. I have moved your additions to your user page. Would recommend you use them to update the aortic stenosis article. Best

Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 17:50, 13 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Copyright issues

We can remove the images, no problem Doc James (talk · contribs · email)
If you own the images than you can release them under an open license. We just need to verify that you own them. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 05:13, 20 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • This image [2] is from [3] a copyrighted source by Catherine Otto.
  • This image [4] is from [5] among others with now evidence it is free
  • This image [6] is from [7] among others with no evidence it is free

Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 18:02, 13 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

As all your images appear to be copyright infringement I will delete them. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 18:08, 13 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Some are from Medtronic and if you work for them / have permission from them, than we can restore some of the images in question. Best Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 20:43, 13 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Coat tract

We already had an article on aortic valve replacement yet you created a new one here Aortic_Valve_Replacement_(AVR) Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 18:23, 13 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

May 2015

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You have been blocked from editing for a period of 2 weeks for copyright issues. Once the block has expired, you are welcome to make useful contributions. If you think there are good reasons why you should be unblocked, you may appeal this block by first reading the guide to appealing blocks, then adding the following text below this notice: {{unblock|reason=Your reason here ~~~~}}.  Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 18:07, 13 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
You have been blocked until such time we can clarify just exactly what is going on. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 18:08, 13 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 11:07, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Issues with your edits

  1. They changed the ordering so it no longer followed WP:MEDMOS
  2. It reduced the lead from 4 paragraphs, not sure why. Please read WP:LEAD
  3. It replaced a 2014 English review with a older review in Polish ( we should use En references generally if possible)
  4. You introduced a section on "etiology" when we already had a section on "causes". The two words mean the same
  5. The picture you added appears to be from here [8]. We are lacking evidence that you own it and therefore are allowed to release it under an open license.
  6. References are not formatted much of the time

Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 11:56, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

This material does not pertain to symptoms "ESC guidelines also suggest that exercise testing either by measuring blood pressure and assessing symptoms during treadmill exercise or “exercise stress echocardiography, may provide prognostic information in asymptomatic severe AS”.[1] As such, physicians should consider these diagnostic tools when faced with patients who they suspect may have asymptomatic severe AS." Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 12:16, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Me and my friend who is helping me just edit that articles, sorry for not clarifying. Euroarti (talk) 13:36, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 13:37, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
So you both use this account or was he the other account User:Ehrahn? Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 13:49, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Continueing to add copyright material

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I have blocked you again as you continue to add copyrighted material to Wikipedia such as

Please advice regarding what you are trying to do? If you own the copyright to this material I can help you with getting it into Wikipedia. Please respond here. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 12:04, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! We're trying to edit the articles to suit more up to date information. I am new to editing so your help would be really appreciated. I see that you are very well-versed in Wikipedia and would like your expertise for us to update the info.Euroarti (talk) 13:15, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Who are you all working with? The concern is that the images you are adding are copyrighted. Do you own the copyright to them?
Also in these edits [11] you took the lead of the article which was based on 2014 sources and replaced them with 2003 and 2006 sounces and a ref from Mount Sinai? Not exactly an update. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 13:23, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

We thought that the images would give the article more life because this is just text. In the future, we'll ensure that any images we select will respect wikipedia image's rule. Could we work with you on the text for editing? Also, could you help us lift the block? Thanks for your help, Euroarti (talk) 13:31, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Who is the "we" you speak of? What text changes do you wish to make? I am happy to discuss and have provided you with some reading material above. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 13:34, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, Ehrahn is my friend helping me but we would edit from only one account from now on if that helps. We just want to edit some sections with more up to date informations, can we edit section by section? Thank you, Euroarti (talk) 13:55, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

You each need to use your own account. Sure we can work on some sections. How about this one Aortic_stenosis#Medication It requires work. You can work on it below. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 13:59, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
By the way is this a school assignment? Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 14:05, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Medication

The effect of statins on the progression of AS is unclear. The latest trials do not show any benefit in slowing AS progression,[2] but did demonstrate a decrease in ischemic cardiovascular events.[3]

In general, medical therapy has relatively poor efficacy in treating aortic stenosis.[4] However, it may be useful to manage commonly coexisting conditions that correlate with aortic stenosis:

While observational studies demonstrated an association between lowered cholesterol with statins and decreased progression, a randomized clinical trial published in 2005 failed to find any effect on calcific aortic stenosis. A 2007 study did demonstrate a slowing of aortic stenosis with the statin rosuvastatin.[2][7]

References

  1. ^ Cite error: The named reference r was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  2. ^ a b Cite error: The named reference Thoughts was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  3. ^ Cite error: The named reference Asymptomatic was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  4. ^ Cite error: The named reference agabegi2nd-ch1 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  5. ^ a b c Cite error: The named reference uas was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  6. ^ Rutherford SD, Braunwald E (1992). "Chronic ischaemic heart disease". In Braunwald E (ed.). Heart disease: A textbook of cardiovascular medicine (4th ed.). Philadelphia: WB Saunders. pp. 1292–364.
  7. ^ Moura LM, Ramos SF, Zamorano JL; et al. (February 2007). "Rosuvastatin affecting aortic valve endothelium to slow the progression of aortic stenosis". Journal of the American College of Cardiology. 49 (5): 554–61. doi:10.1016/j.jacc.2006.07.072. PMC 3951859. PMID 17276178.{{cite journal}}: CS1 maint: multiple names: authors list (link)

No, it's not a school assessment. I agree with you about Aortic_stenosis#Medication section. It will need more work. We were thinking about removing it and add more SUBHEADER under the Management's HEADER. So we would have:

Management

Medical management

Statins

Aortic valve replacement (AVR)

Surgical valve replacement

Percutaneous (transcatheter) aortic valve replacement

Non-replacement treatments

Apicoaortic conduit

Balloon valvuloplasty

Could we add the text edit in those sections? Euroarti (talk) 14:18, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Medical management / statins can basically be dealt with under the heading "medications" IMO. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 14:37, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Yes we could merge these two into one section if clearer. The copy is ready, please let me know if we could work together to update those sections. Euroarti (talk) 14:47, 2 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

What do you mean by "the copy is ready"? Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 15:01, 2 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]


The copy that we would like to update. Euroarti (talk) 15:13, 2 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The version you would like to update is here yes. You have provided some headings above. That is all I see. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 15:27, 2 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Euroarti, please respond to my question above about conflict of interest. Your not answering, is a pretty clear sign that you are editing in violation of the Terms of Use. If you are, it is not fatal -- it is fixable by disclosing and working with us on this. Thanks. Jytdog (talk) 15:24, 2 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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