Talk:Extramammary Paget's disease

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Technical tag

I placed a technical tag on this article several months ago. The article has changed since then and someone removed the tag, but I think that removal was not appropriate. The first two paragraphs of the article use the words "epithelium," "lactiferous," "erythematous," and "eczematous." I have a (non-medical) graduate-level education and do not know what any of those words mean. The second sentence defines it with reference to "Mammary Paget’s disease," which, again, is extremely unhelpful to a lay reader. Going deeper into the article, it only gets worse. It starts talking about "adenocarcinoma" (again, couldn't define that if you asked me) without explanation.

This article needs serious cleanup to make it understandable to people outside the medical field. I understand that this is a complicated topic, but there are lots of complicated topics on Wikipedia. This article should not be impenetrable. agtx 17:55, 14 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]