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Your submission at Articles for creation: Sputnik Brain (July 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SafariScribe was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

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Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 18:21, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @SafariScribe , thank you for your review.

Please check this edit and feel free to let me know of the changes you deem necessary.

These are neutral facts that seem to be listed in reliable newspapers and sources, would like to know your version of the edit while being as accurate as possible to the evidences listed in primary sources.

"Sputnik Brain is an Indian deep tech startup that is focused on the development of a nonsurgical brain modulation device for stress reduction.

The company was one of three winners of the inaugural season of Samsung's "Solve for Tomorrow" competition in India, which saw participation from over 18,000 applicants. As a winner, Sputnik Brain received a grant of INR 1 crore and incubation support from the Foundation for Innovation and Technology Transfer (FITT) at the Indian Institute of Technology (IIT) Delhi.

The company was also selected as one of the 12 grant recipients in India for the Behavioral Nudges theme in the United Nations Development Programme's (UNDP) Youth Co:Lab, an initiative that promotes youth-led entrepreneurship and innovation across the Asia-Pacific region." Trubluani (talk) 16:18, 18 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Trubluani! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 18:21, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

User talk:Trubluani

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sputnik Brain (July 17)

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