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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (July 13)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SafariScribe was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 09:17, 13 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I've since added more citations and references. Could you review my updates before my next submission to avoid risking page deletion?

Thank you Marvinno47 (talk) 10:38, 13 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Marvinno47! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 09:17, 13 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Peaceland University (July 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by DoubleGrazing were:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)
reliable
secondary
strictly independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Peaceland University and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:28, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your previous feedback regarding my draft submission for Peaceland University. I have carefully reviewed your comments and made the necessary revisions. Specifically, I have:

Added multiple published sources that are in-depth, reliable, secondary, and strictly independent of the subject.

Ensured the references meet all the criteria you outlined.

Rewritten the submission in a formal, encyclopedic tone, removing any promotional language and ensuring neutrality.

Could you kindly review the updated draft to ensure it now meets Wikipedia's requirements before I resubmit?

Thank you for your assistance. Marvinno47 (talk) 16:25, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

User talk:Marvinno47

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (July 13)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Peaceland University (July 15)

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