Template:Did you know nominations/Lasse Bengtsson
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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:14, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
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Lasse Bengtsson
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Lasse Bengtsson
- ... that Swedish television presenter Lasse Bengtsson (pictured) was a reporter for Viasat's broadcasting of the 2016 Summer Olympics?
- Reviewed: William Matthews (priest)
Created by BabbaQ (talk). Self-nominated at 17:02, 30 August 2016 (UTC).
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Some issues found.
- ✓ This article is new and was created on 21:44, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- ✗ This article is too short at 1376 characters (the DYK minimum is 1500 characters)
- ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
- Note that this is a biographical article about a living person. All claims must be cited to a reliable source.
- ✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
- ✓ A copyright violation is unlikely according to automated metrics (0.0% confidence; confirm)
- Note to reviewers: There is low confidence in this automated metric, please manually verify that there is no copyright infringement or close paraphrasing. Note that this number may be inflated due to cited quotes and titles which do not constitute a copyright violation.
• No overall issues detected
- ✓ The media File:Lasse Bengtsson, Bokmässan 2013 2 (crop).jpg is free-use
- ✓ The hook ALT0 is an appropriate length at 133 characters
- ✓ BabbaQ has more than 5 DYK credits. A QPQ review of Template:Did you know nominations/William Matthews (priest) was performed for this nomination.
Automatically reviewed by DYKReviewBot. This is not a substitute for a human review. Please report any issues with the bot. --DYKReviewBot (report bugs) 19:20, 30 August 2016 (UTC)
This article is new enough and long enough. The hook fact is cited to a Swedish language source and accepted in good faith. The article is neutral and the image appropriately licensed. I did not check for copyright issues because of the Swedish language sources. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:11, 8 September 2016 (UTC)
So looking for hooks to put into the prep I came across this one. I am sorry but that's a boring hook "did you know this tv presented worked as a tv presenter for event X"?? Is there something more interesting in the article that can be used as a hook BabbaQ? MPJ-DK 03:39, 10 September 2016 (UTC)
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... that Swedish television presenter Lasse Bengtsson (pictured) got the first televised interview with Mattias Flink in March 2009, about fifteen years after his mass murder?
- BabbaQ - to me this is a much more interesting hook, thank you for taking a second look at it. I did a little copyediting to the article, just a few things to make the language flow better. Looking at the hook that's covered in the article and sourced. I do want to suggest a slight revision so that it does sound like Flink was mass murdered or Bengtsson comitted the murder. Since I only provided a slight copyedit to the suggested hook I am okay to accept it, but someone else will have to move it to prep to get a different set of eyes on it. MPJ-DK 15:09, 10 September 2016 (UTC)
- ALT1:... that Swedish television presenter Lasse Bengtsson (pictured) got the first televised interview with Mattias Flink in March 2009, about fifteen years after Flink committed mass murder?
