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I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Superstar (Marina Song)'s orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.
I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT⚡04:42, 15 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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Reviewing one of your articles once again, this time I'll be going for one of the oldest songs nominees currently. --K. Peake17:48, 29 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Infobox and lead
Remove hlist from the infobox
Remove venue parameter as that is only for live recordings
Link to the music video
"for her fourth studio album," → "from her fourth studio album,"
"that was compared often" → "that was often compared"
"its lyrics describe" → "the lyrics describe"
"received a generally mixed response" → "received generally mixed reviews"
"songwriting on the track was" → "lyrics for the song were"
"which divided critics." not enough reviews to make such a claim so remove it
"A music video featuring the" → "A music video for the" with the appropriate wikilink
"room and gives the impression" → "room, while giving the impression"
"was also included on the setlist to" → "was included on the setlist for"
This sentence should come directly before the first about the acoustic version
Background and release
"She explained that" → "She explained that,"
"After her announcement, she" → "After the announcement, Marina"
"her first new single under the name," → "her first single under the new name," with the appropriate target
"She also announced Love + Fear" → "She announced Love + Fear"
"and first under her new name." →"and first as Marina."
"The track listing for the project was revealed the same day," → "The track listing was revealed the same day,"
"composed of two acts" → "that is composed of two segments,"
"she specifically asked her label" → "that she specifically asked her record label Atlantic Records" with the wikilink
"She justified this request," → "She justified the request,"
"creative control in her" → "creative control for her"
"and did not this" → "and did not want this"
"and produced by" → "with production being handled by"
"Marina performed her vocals" → "Marina recorded her vocals" since it otherwise sounds like a live performance
"was sent to music distributors such as Amazon Music and Spotify for" → "was released for"
"on 1 March 2019 through Atlantic Records." → "in various countries on 1 March 2019 through Marina's record label."
"It was marketed as" → "It served as"
"A promotional CD single intended for radio airplay was distributed in" → "A promotional CD single, intended for radio airplay, was distributed throughout" with the targets
Remove wikilink on Benelux
"was also recorded and included on the track listing for" → "was later recorded and released as the fourth track on"
Composition and lyrics
"what the rest of the album" → "what the rest of Love + Fear"
"on Marina's second studio album," → "on Marina's second studio album"
"called the song" → "called the track"
"of a piano on the track." → "of a piano."
"According to the official sheet music published at Musicnotes.com," → "According to the sheet music at Musicnotes.com,"
Cite numerous countries for ref 8 to verify that the release was various and put the retailers in brackets; (CA) for example
Remove refs 10 and 11 since Apple Music verifies digital download/streaming
Remove target on Marina for ref 13
Retitle ref 30 to Motion and cite Nikko La Mere instead for publisher
External links
(Audio video) → (Audio Video)
Remove the music video from here
Final comments and verdict
On hold and I am sorry about the delay in the review, I was a bit stressed out about some real life issues yesterday. --K. Peake08:55, 31 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Kyle Peake – no worries. I believe I addressed all of your comments through my editing. Please let me know if there is anything else I can do for this review. Thanks again, Carbrera (talk) 18:45, 7 August 2020 (UTC).[reply]
Carbrera You did not add a caption to the release history table, also I did not mean to put the countries in brackets for the Amazon citations; fix these issues please. --K. Peake08:38, 8 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Carbrera Looks like you misinterpreted my statement; I meant that the Amazon refs stay the same apart from the countries in brackets being removed, while you fix the publisher so Amazon.com (UK) → Amazon.co.uk, for example. --K. Peake20:16, 8 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]