Talk:Pure Heroine Tour/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 12:43, 17 January 2019 (UTC)

Lead and infobox

• Please add ALT text for the infobox image.
• I am not sure if the reference for the lead is necessary. References in the lead are usually reserved for controversial information, and I think that the part aobut the unreleased song should also be located and cited in the body of the article.

Background

• Wikilink “Lorde” when you first mention her in the body of the article.
• Remember to include ALT text for all of the images in the body of the article.
• For this part (In an interview with Fuse), would it be possible to add a wikilink for “Fuse”? Is this a reference to Fuse (TV channel)?

Development

• Everything looks good here.

Concert synopsis

• For this part (The show was divided mainly into three parts.), I am uncertain if “mainly” is needed.
• This part (The set included three screens of video that showed Lorde and her band.) needs a citation. The same comment applies to this part (She also cites her fear of aging as inspiration.).
• For this part (was set in blue colors), maybe “shades of blue” would be better than “blue colors”.

Reception

• Great work with this section.

Final comments

• Wonderful work on this article. Once my comments are addressed, I will be more than happy to pass this. One day, I should really work on a tour article lol. Aoba47 (talk) 12:43, 17 January 2019 (UTC)

@Aoba47: Went ahead and fixed the article. Thank you so much for reviewing this! You should try to do some tour articles. I initially thought they would be a nightmare to do but they proved to be quite easy. De88 (talk) 21:32, 17 January 2019 (UTC)

• Thank you for addressing everything! And maybe in the future. I will ✓ Pass this though now lol. Aoba47 (talk) 21:34, 17 January 2019 (UTC)