Talk:Membrane steroid receptor

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This article is a stub and has room for significant expansion. In a complete article, these questions, as a start, should be addressed. Yes, membrane steroid receptors are different from other steroid receptors because of location. How does location affect function? Why can these receptors live on the membrane when other steroid receptors need to live inside, what's different about their makeup? The sources are few and need more backup before this article can become a significant contribution. Levin ER is in the source list twice, as is Hammes SR. Their work may be important regarding the subject, but more diverse support would be optimal. All four sources seem legitimate; none are obviously false or too full of jargon. The source from Watson, C. S. from 1999 seemed outdated. It’s should not necessarily be removed, but it should be used with specificity. Moving forward, these citations are insufficient. Using all four at once is a little inappropriate and does not lend quadruple authority to the sentences that have quadruple citation. The uncited information towards the end of the article needs more support. The language of the article is a little too technical and not concise enough. The section detailing known groups of membrane steroid receptors should become a table; reading it as text is laborious and not particularly helpful. The number of technical terms should be reduced. Some of the sentences would be more readable with restructuring and removal of unnecessary prepositions and wordiness. -Crewis (talk) 21:58, 25 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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