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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:24, 1 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Will also take on this review. MWright96 (talk) 20:24, 1 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Personal life

  • "Euforias son, born August 12, 1993," - Euforia's
  • "("The Grandson of El Soberano)" - this text is missing the closed quotation mark

Professional wrestling career

  • "Soberano made his Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (CMLL) debut on April 23, 2006, in one of the opening matches." - which match?
  • "He only wrestled a limited number of matches before disappearing from CMLL shows. His son currently works under the ring name Soberano Jr." - needs a reliable source to to verify this text of information
  • "those that portray the bad guys in wresting" - "bad guys" is informal; how about villains?
  • "that participated in the 2007 Gran Alternativa tournament, a tournament where an" - try to avoid close reptition of the word "tournament"
  • The date formats in "In June, 2007 Euforia was" and "In June, 2008 Los Nuevos Infernales" should not have a comma after the month per MOS:DATESNO
  • "in the second round they defeated Metallik and Metálico and in the third round they defeated Ángel Azteca Jr. and Máscara Purpura " - beat and eliminated, respectively to avoid the overuse of the word "defeat"
  • "at CMLL's La Hora Cero Pay-Per-View on" - the text in bold should be written as pay-per-view
  • "By mid-2009 Euforia and Nosferatu teamed less and less, Nosferatu was even replaced by" - a full stop should replace the comma, and the "word" "even" in the second bolded word is redundant

Los Cancerberos del Infierno (2009–2012)

  • What is a mid-carder?
  • "but actually two low card wrestlers that had been repackaged," - the comma should be a semi-colon
  • "while Cancerbero was known as Messala." - how about called for some variety?
  • "in a tournament to crown new Mexican National Trios Champion." - the new
  • "In early 2010 Euforia was entered in the first ever" - inaugural is more formal
  • "a tournament where CMLL normally teams up a Tecnico and a Rudo for a tournament where the teams represent the region they trained in." - probaly better: a tournament where CMLL groups a Technico and a Rudo together for a contest where teams represent the region they trained in.

Los Guerreros Laguneros (2012–present)

  • Delink Japanese as it is a major geographical region
  • "The team defeated Ángel de Oro and Ephesto in the first round of the tournament," - try tournament's first round,
  • "He was eliminated from the torneo cibernetico on September 1 by Kenny King." - by Kenny King on September 1.
  • "Euforia as a participant in the 2017 International Gran Prix." - was
  • "as they defeated the Sky Team in the main event of CMLL's Domingos Arena México show." - , as they defeated them

References

  • References 10 and 25 are missing the respective authors of the articles
  • Reference 10's translated title - "The brst of Mexican professional wrestling 2008" - typo: best
  • References 4, 14, 16, 18 are all lacking a translated title as has been done with several other citations

Those were all the issues that popped-up. On hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 09:25, 2 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  • MWright96 I believe I have addressed all the issues listed, thank you. MPJ-DK (talk) 22:44, 2 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • @MPJ-DK: Have made some edits to the article to address those issues that were not actioned. Anyway, the article can now become a GA. MWright96 (talk) 11:30, 3 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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