Talk:Eileen Niedfield

GA Review

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Reviewer: Maxim Masiutin (talk · contribs) 22:37, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Review start

Hello, Fortunaa!

While reviewing, I filled in the missing "importance" values for the Wikiprojects templates. Could you please check the importance criteria defined by each Wikiproject to ensure all importance values are set correctly?

Also, can you please take care of the {{Short description}}, which should not contain a trailing dot and should preferably be shorter than it is today? Could you please check the whole set of recommendations at Wikipedia:Short_description? maybe you will have ideas on how to shorten it so you can edit it.

Maxim Masiutin (talk · contribs) 22:37, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for all of this, and for being so precise. I shortened the {{Short description}} and removed the trailing dot as you suggested. I also reviewed her "importance" values. I changed her importance in DC and the US to mid, and offered factual rationales for each. For DC the first women graduates of Georgetown's medical center are important prima facie for the city, and for the US she also managed to be #1 in the nation in pathology, which is significant enough to warrant mid-importance. Fortunaa (talk) 01:58, 23 November 2023 (UTC)

Review process

Hello, Fortunaa!

Thank you for your contribution in writing and submitting the biography article about Eileen Rae Niedfield for Wikipedia's Good Article review. As a reviewer, I thoroughly read the article with great interest, finding it to be engaging and well-written. The prose is clear, concise, and accessible to a wide range of readers. I have made necessary corrections to spelling and grammar errors throughout.

The article adheres to the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections; however, there seemed to be a lack of concluding sentences in the lead section. To address this, I added a closing sentence. Additionally, while it was mentioned that Niedfield belonged to one of the first cohorts of women graduates from Georgetown University Medical School, no specific year was provided in the lead section. Therefore, I included this detail.

Regarding sources, all references are verifiable and presented appropriately according to Wikipedia's layout style guidelines. Inline citations support information from reliable sources; however, there were some claims lacking proper sourcing or citation at the end of paragraphs. To rectify this issue, I utilized ancestry.com as a source for dates and found an additional newspaper source mentioning her work with Mother Teresa.

Regarding legality and originality concerns, I conducted thorough checks using tools such as Copyleaks, which confirmed that there are no copyright violations or instances of plagiarism within the article content. As a reviewer, I was obliged to check that.

The coverage provided by the article is comprehensive as it encompasses various stages of Niedfield's life including her family background and legacy among other aspects related to her biography. The focus remains on-topic without delving into unnecessary details.

It is important to note that your substantial solo effort in writing most parts of this article is greatly appreciated! The stability criterion is also met since no significant changes or ongoing disputes regarding its content or edit wars have been observed thus far.

While photographs within the article are adequately tagged with copyright statuses and accompanied by suitable captions enhancing its visual appeal, further images could potentially be sourced from newspapers; obtaining permissions may require extra effort but would enhance the overall presentation. Still, these extra images are not necessary from the point of view of a GA criteria reviewer, but as an editor, in the future, adding such images may improve the article.

Please see the edits that I made to the article, and let me know what you think of these edits and of the short description of the article I mentioned earlier.

Maxim Masiutin (talk) 01:47, 23 November 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for making necessary and improving changes, and for suggesting some future growth with the article. I can also consult with the university about adding archival photographs if they allow me to put Creative Commons licenses on them. I am grateful for your excellent editing. Fortunaa (talk) 02:00, 23 November 2023 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Retracted

This GA review is retracted and the article nominee returns to the backlog for pending review, as requested on https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia_talk%3AGood_article_nominations&diff=1186450459&oldid=1186444458 Maxim Masiutin (talk) 07:06, 23 November 2023 (UTC)

GA Review

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Reviewer: AirshipJungleman29 (talk · contribs) 13:29, 23 November 2023 (UTC)

I'll take this review. Comments will follow in the next couple of days. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:29, 23 November 2023 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it well written?

   A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

   B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:

2. Is it verifiable with no original research?

   A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:

   B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):

   C. It contains no original research:

   D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

   B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):

4. Is it neutral?

   It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:

5. Is it stable?

   It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:

6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

Source spotchecks

A random spotcheck of citations to ensure there are no plagiarism, close paraphrasing, or original research. Fortunaa, could you please provide a quotation of the relevant information for the following sources, if possible

• "It's always wise to check the program". Clinical Congress News. Chicago, Illinois: American College of Surgeons: 2. 15 October 1970.
• Eilberg, Joshua (24 April 1967). "Medical Mission Sisters, Extension of Remarks of Hon. Joshua Eilberg of Pennsylvania in the House of Representatives". Congressional Record, March 01 – April 28, 1967. 113: A1988.

Thanks, ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 22:20, 25 November 2023 (UTC)

1. https://archive.org/details/CCN19701015/page/n1/mode/2up?q=%22It%27s+always+wise+to+check+the+program%22
2. https://archive.org/details/sim_congressional-record-proceedings-and-debates_march-01-april-28-1967_113_appendix/page/1988/mode/2up?q=%22Medical+Mission+Sisters%22

Fortunaa (talk) 03:04, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

Let me know if you would prefer screenshots or if links are enough. Fortunaa (talk) 13:06, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

These are fine, thank you. Looking at the first paragraph of the "Medical service in India and Bhutan" section, there is sizeable amounts of prose that is not verified by the cited sources. The "Gazette of India" source verifies none of the first four sentences of the section, and the same goes for the last sentence, meant to be verified by the "Clinical Congress News" source. The "Medical Annals" source verifies the "averaged 600 major surgical cases per year, and had 3,000 total inpatients annually", but does not verify the "130 beds".

This is not the only citation issue in the article. I do not have access to the documents at familysearch.org, but it is listed as a generally unreliable source at WP:RSP. This PDF is positioned to cite the following sentences: He served in the New York 27th Infantry Division when it was called up to national service in Mexico (1916–1917) and France (1917–1918). After the war, he worked as a career firefighter in the New York City Fire Department, retiring as a lieutenant. The only thing you can determine from the source cited is that he held the rank of Fireman in the New York City Fire Department between 1919 and 1921. There are also two uncited sentences tagged with [citation needed].

These citation issues are sadly rather significant, and I will be failing this GAN because of them. There are a variety of other issues I would advise fixing in addition to the sourcing issues before a second nomination. These include an odd layout (there are three sections dealing with her work in India, arranged non-chronologically and rather confusingly) and three short paragraphs at the end of the early life section which breach MOS:PARA. Notwithstanding these issues, this article does have GA potential, and I hope that you will get it to the required standard. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 19:56, 28 November 2023 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Eileen Niedfield/GA3. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Fortunaa (talk · contribs) 12:43, 6 March 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: HistoryTheorist (talk · contribs) 02:55, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

Hello! I look forward to reviewing this article. Depending on my schedule, a full review might not come until next weekend, but I hope to review this article in bits and pieces over the week. This review will focus on making original research issues and the other MOS details Airship mentioned, as I trust (but will verify) that the other aspects they checked remain up to GA standards. ❤HistoryTheorist❤ 02:55, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

General comments

• Could you provide a digital copy of source #2 please? (I might end up wanting digital copies of all online sources you provided, so be prepared).

Early life and education

• I don't know what reference #3 shows for you, but I'm not seeing anything about Niedfield's father being descended from German immigrants and converted from Lutheranism to Catholicism as a young man. All I'm seeing is a record of Niedfield's birth and death dates along with a listing of her parents.
• Ref #4 verifies that Joseph was a firefighter but does not verify that he served in the army during WWI. You're going to need to add another reference or remove it all together.
• Ref #10 only verifies her entering MMS as a postulant and nothing else. Do you have a ref that could back up the rest of the claims?