Talk:Cigarette

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when did this article turn into a non smoking ad?

the entire opening section after the first paragraph basically reads like one big nonsmoking ad, listing nothing but the negative effects of cigarettes and how "bad" they are for your health..

shouldnt an article open up with a general blurb or two about the main topic (the opening text above the two images seems sufficient) and then have all the specific health related risks/concerns that are listed below the images in their own subsection?

especially since there is already a subsection titled: "health effects" that contains such a ridiculously detailed breakdown of all the negative aspects of smoking, it basically makes the information after that first opening paragraph redundant.

it just doesnt seem as though it reads like a "normal" article with all that negativity being listed in the opening and then listed again in its own subsection.

i know it really doesnt matter what i think, and if i remove it somebody will just revert it.. so thats why i came here first to point out how "extra" it all seems, in hopes of someone taking another look at it and either dealing with it or getting back to me, probably with an elaborate yet somehow valid explanation as to why it "needs" to be that way.

thanks in advance. Snarevox (talk) 19:29, 28 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

nvm i found a decent reason in WP:LEAD
thx anyway. Snarevox (talk) 15:33, 30 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I was coming here to say this. The article is biased probably cause only nonsmokers edited it. PuppyMonkey (talk) 01:25, 20 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Simple. It's all about control. Don't worry though, it's Für Ihre Sicherheit.
Wikipedia is a joke. 71.209.111.82 (talk) 09:08, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 29 May 2023

In the context of birth defects, please change “pregnant people” to “pregnant women”. 2601:249:601:90E0:193B:8BC7:A399:F1F2 (talk) 02:14, 29 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done for now: please establish a consensus for this alteration before using the {{Edit semi-protected}} template. Women who are pregnant fall under the umbrella of people who are pregnant. No reason not to use the broader phrasing. ScottishFinnishRadish (talk) 02:16, 29 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 17 August 2023

change “an herbal cigarette” to “a herbal cigarette”

(11th line) 2A02:C7C:7422:4B00:182B:8AE3:7AC3:8175 (talk) 17:23, 17 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
 Not done: The "h" is unvoiced in the most common pronunciation, so "an herbal cigarette" is correct. —C.Fred (talk) 17:27, 17 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I would like enlarge tis article with just coming future of Cigarettes - non Electronic without pyrolisis in any kind

Hello, I would like to enlarge your article about new step at cigarette "life road" as this artice contain history of clasicc Cigarette and current status as eCigarettes (electronic or electric ones) and what I want to add is just right now comming future of Ciggarettes - non electronical one, enviromental friendly even fully biodegradable as new invention in EU. I can provide more details and pictures for posible enlargment of tis article. Thx 89.24.40.99 (talk) 04:56, 20 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 25 January 2024

Citation needed for number of people killed by smoking and second hand smoke. 97.103.241.0 (talk) 09:13, 25 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done: The sources appear in the article prose at the appropriate claims already. -- ferret (talk) 15:01, 25 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education assignment: The Climate Crisis - Global Perspective, Mediterranean Context

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 17 January 2024 and 24 April 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Climatewarrior88 (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Climatewarrior88 (talk) 15:51, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]