MrADHD - I left a concern for you to address about the sourcing, could you look at it and respond please. Zad68 02:22, 17 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Did more; updated sourcing table to reflect latest changes (including sourced removed/replaced). Zad68 20:07, 21 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
MrADHD - source review is finished (finally!). I have some notes for you to review either address or explain as needed. Many of the items are very quick to fix, and in the few cases where I found a source non-WP:RS I've tried to provide an alternative. Once these are addressed we'll go through the prose review. Looking good so far, sourcing was largely very good. Zad68 02:19, 26 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Moving forward again now. Nearly all sourcing items were addressed adequately. There's a few more fiddly things I need to check, and I've moved just those notes below the (now collapsed) sourcing table. Will start the prose review. Zad68 02:19, 30 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Prose review finished now, mostly small things that can be fixed quickly. You can go ahead and do those now. I have a small number of outstanding sourcing issues I'd like to review and will provide notes on in a bit, nothing overwhelming. Zad68 15:46, 31 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
All notes done now. There's a bit of content regarding Executive Function that has to be updated to WP:MEDRS-compliant sourcing, that's probably the biggest chunk of work, and a number of other items ranging from there down to trivial. Once this round is complete we should be very close to done. Turning back over to you. Zad68 18:41, 31 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
On further reflection, Barkley's online course really doesn't meet sourcing requirements, I've added requests to re-source or remove the content. Zad68 15:07, 2 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Now only two very small items left, an attribution is needed for the views of Neill and one grammar/clarity fix is needed in the section on High IQ children. Identified below with red Ns. Zad68 16:19, 16 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Now meets GA standards! Congratulations, this was a huge chunk of work. Zad68 23:28, 16 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
Sourcing review complete, all items addressed satisfactorily or moved to notes below
In general I'm concerned about the sourcing. There's far too many individual articles being used to support just one or two facts in the article. I feel like we're getting a scattershot view of the disorder in the article, and not a homogeneous overview with the various symptoms and related concepts selected and presented in due weight. Zad68 02:20, 17 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
In this table:
Source lists the source as cited in the article
Seems WP:RS? means, "Does this source appear to meet WP:RS for reliable sourcing?"
Use OK? means, is the source used appropriately in the article? For the review, a few selected sources will be spot-checked to ensure they aren't plagiarized and support the article content. ? indicates the source was not spot-checked.
Notes will summarize problems found and what needs to be done to fix them
<ref>{{cite book|last=Bray|first=edited by Melissa A.|title=The Oxford handbook of school psychology|publisher=Oxford University Press|location=New York|isbn=978-0-19-536980-9|page=285|year=2011|url=http://books.google.ca/books?id=qyWN1cZ9dqAC&pg=PA285|coauthors=Kehle, Thomas J.}}</ref>
Y
Y
Would prefer "psychiatric disorder" like source uses but "mental disorder" is apparently equivalent
<ref name=NIMH>{{cite web|url=http://www.ninds.nih.gov/disorders/adhd/adhd.htm|title=Attention Deficit-Hyperactivity Disorder Information Page|volume=|publisher=National Institute of Health|work=National Institute of Neurological Disorders and Stroke|date=September 30, 2012|accessdate=September 8, 2012}}</ref>
Y
Y
<ref name=CDC>{{cite web|url=http://www.cdc.gov/ncbddd/adhd/diagnosis.html|title=Attention-Deficit / Hyperactivity Disorder (ADHD): Symptoms and Diagnosis|publisher=[[National Center on Birth Defects and Developmental Disabilities]]|work=[[Centers for Disease Control and Prevention]]|date=December 12, 2010|accessdate=September 8, 2012}}</ref>
Y
Y
<ref>{{cite web |url=http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmedhealth/PMH0002518/ |title=Attention deficit hyperactivity disorder |author=anonymous |work=[[A.D.A.M. Medical Encyclopedia]]|month=25 March 2012 |publisher=A.D.A.M. Health Solutions |location=USA }}</ref>
<ref>{{Cite journal|author=Nair J, Ehimare U, Beitman BD, Nair SS, Lavin A |title=Clinical review: evidence-based diagnosis and treatment of ADHD in children |journal=Mo Med |volume=103 |issue=6 |pages=617–21 |year=2006 |pmid=17256270|url=}}</ref>
PMID17256270: Review; can you find a more up-to-date source? this is 7 years old and I'm sure there are newer reviews <---- Y done. I have removed this source as a newer one is being use that is sufficient, I feel.--MrADHD | T@1k? 11:42, 19 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref>{{Cite journal|author=Rader R, McCauley L, Callen EC |title=Current strategies in the diagnosis and treatment of childhood attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder |journal=Am Fam Physician |volume=79 |issue=8 |pages=657–65 |year=2009 |month=April |pmid=19405409|url=}}</ref>
<ref>{{Cite journal|author=Van Cleave J, Leslie LK |title=Approaching ADHD as a chronic condition: implications for long-term adherence |journal=Journal of Psychosocial Nursing and Mental Health Services |volume=46 |issue=8 |pages=28–37 |year=2008 |month=August |pmid=18777966|}}</ref>
<ref name="pmid19393378">{{cite journal |author=Emond V, Joyal C, Poissant H |title=[Structural and functional neuroanatomy of attention-deficit hyperactivity disorder (ADHD)]|language=French |journal=Encephale |volume=35 |issue=2 |pages=107–14 |year=2009 |month=April |pmid=19393378|doi=10.1016/j.encep.2008.01.005 |url=}}</ref>
Y
Y
PMID19393378: Review; used only in lead, shouldn't be sources used only in lead and not in body. <--- fixed Y --MrADHD | T@1k? 16:28, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref name="Singh I 2008 957_64">{{Cite journal|author=Singh I |title=Beyond polemics: science and ethics of ADHD |journal=Nature Reviews. Neuroscience |volume=9 |issue=12 |pages=957–64 |year=2008|month=December |pmid=19020513|doi=10.1038/nrn2514}}</ref>
<ref name =Ramsay25>{{cite book|author=Ramsay, J. Russell |title=Cognitive behavioral therapy for adult ADHD|publisher=Routledge |year=2007 |isbn=0-415-95501-7 |page=25}}</ref>
<ref>{{cite journal | pmid=15841682| volume=35 | issue=2 | title=The World Health Organization Adult ADHD Self-Report Scale (ASRS): a short screening scale for use in the general population | year=2005 | month=February | author=Kessler RC, Adler L, Ames M, ''et al.'' | pages=245–56 | journal = Psychological Medicine | doi = 10.1017/S0033291704002892}}</ref>
<ref name="Parrillo 2008 63">{{Cite book|title=Encyclopedia of Social Problems |last=Parrillo |first=Vincent |year=2008 |publisher=SAGE |isbn=978-1-4129-4165-5 |page=63 |url=http://books.google.com/?id=mRGr_B4Y1CEC&pg=PA63&dq=percent+who+consider+ADHD+controversial |accessdate=2009-05-02 |authorlink=Vincent N. Parrillo}}</ref>
Y
Y
<ref name=autogenerated3>{{Cite journal|author=Mayes R, Bagwell C, Erkulwater J |title=ADHD and the rise in stimulant use among children |journal=Harv Rev Psychiatry |volume=16 |issue=3 |pages=151–66 |year=2008 |pmid=18569037|doi=10.1080/10673220802167782|url=}}</ref>
<ref name=ICSI2012>{{cite journal|last=Dobie|first=C|title=Diagnosis and management of attention deficit hyperactivity disorder in primary care for school-age children and adolescents|year=2012|pages=79|url=http://guidelines.gov/content.aspx?f=rss&id=36812|publisher=Institute for Clinical Systems Improvement}}</ref>
<ref>{{cite web |url=http://www.cdc.gov/ncbddd/adhd/facts.html |title=Facts About ADHD |publisher=NCBDDD |author=Centers for Disease Control and Prevention |accessdate=2012-11-13 }}</ref>
Y
Y
<ref name =Ramsay26>{{cite book|author=Ramsay, J. Russell |title=Cognitive behavioral therapy for adult ADHD|publisher=Routledge |year=2007 |isbn=0-415-95501-7 |page=26}}</ref>
<ref name =Ramsay4>{{cite book|author=Ramsay, J. Russell |title=Cognitive behavioral therapy for adult ADHD|publisher=Routledge |year=2007 |isbn=0-415-95501-7 |page=4}}</ref>
<ref name="NIMH1">{{cite web |url=http://www.nimh.nih.gov/health/publications/attention-deficit-hyperactivity-disorder/complete-index.shtml |title=Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder (ADHD) |author=National Institute of Mental Health |authorlink=National Institute of Mental Health |year=2008 |publisher=[[National Institutes of Health]] |location=USA }}</ref>
Primary source. Not pubmed indexed. link to journal --Garrondo (talk) 06:53, 8 May 2013 (UTC)[reply] Agree this is not good, esp. as it's being used to support content talking about a "diagnosis". Zad68 19:24, 10 May 2013 (UTC)[reply] Y removed so fixed now
<ref name="pmid20490677">{{cite journal |author=Mikami AY |title=The importance of friendship for youth with attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder |journal=Clin Child Fam Psychol Rev |volume=13 |issue=2 |pages=181–98 |year=2010 |month=June |pmid=20490677|pmc=2921569 |doi=10.1007/s10567-010-0067-y }}</ref>
<ref name="pmid18822833">{{cite journal |author=Coleman WL |title=Social competence and friendship formation in adolescents with attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder |journal=Adolesc Med State Art Rev |volume=19 |issue=2 |pages=278–99, x |year=2008 |month=August |pmid=18822833|}}</ref>
<ref name="pmid19940426">{{cite journal |author=McBurnett K, Pfiffner LJ |title=Treatment of aggressive ADHD in children and adolescents: conceptualization and treatment of comorbid behavior disorders |journal=Postgrad Med |volume=121 |issue=6 |pages=158–65 |year=2009 |month=November |pmid=19940426|doi=10.3810/pgm.2009.11.2084 |url=}}</ref>
<ref name=UTP2008>{{cite web|url=http://www.uptodate.com/online/content/topic.do?topicKey=behavior/8293#5 |author = Krull, K.R. |title=Evaluation and diagnosis of attention deficit hyperactivity disorder in children |format= Subscription required |accessdate=2008-09-12 |publisher=Uptodate |date=5 December 2007 }}</ref>
A secondary source in a peer-reviewed journal would be more interesting.--Garrondo (talk) 17:12, 10 May 2013 (UTC)[reply] Y I think Uptodate is OK for how it's used. Zad68 16:28, 23 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref>{{cite journal | pmid=19428109| doi=10.1016/j.ijlp.2009.04.004 | volume=32 | issue=4 | title=Continuity of aggressive antisocial behavior from childhood to adulthood: The question of phenotype definition | year=2009 | author=Hofvander B, Ossowski D, Lundström S, Anckarsäter H | journal=Int J Law Psychiatry | pages=224–34}}</ref>
Y
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PMID19428109: Review - Journal is International Journal of Law and Psychiatry, seems like it's publishing a bit outside its field here but I guess it's OK
<ref name="pmid21094938">{{cite journal |author=Rubia K |title="Cool" inferior frontostriatal dysfunction in attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder versus "hot" ventromedial orbitofrontal-limbic dysfunction in conduct disorder: a review |journal=Biol. Psychiatry |volume=69 |issue=12 |pages=e69–87 |year=2011 |month=June |pmid=21094938|doi=10.1016/j.biopsych.2010.09.023 }}</ref>
<ref>{{Cite journal|author=Philipsen A |title=Differential diagnosis and comorbidity of attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder (ADHD) and borderline personality disorder (BPD) in adults |journal=European Archives of Psychiatry and Clinical Neuroscience |volume=256 Suppl 1 |pages=i42–6 |year=2006 |month=September |pmid=16977551|doi=10.1007/s00406-006-1006-2}}</ref>
I have not been able to find support for the study it mentions.--Garrondo (talk) 17:08, 10 May 2013 (UTC) Y I agree - have had my doubts myself. I have removed it.--MrADHD | T@1k? 16:33, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
In French: probably a similar or better source could be found in English.--Garrondo (talk) 20:37, 10 May 2013 (UTC)[reply] Agree but OK for what it's used for. Zad68 02:15, 17 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref name="Wilens_2011">{{Cite journal | last1 = Wilens | first1 = TE. | last2 = Morrison | first2 = NR. | title = The intersection of attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder and substance abuse. | journal = Curr Opin Psychiatry | volume = 24 | issue = 4 | pages = 280–5 | month = Jul | year = 2011 | doi = 10.1097/YCO.0b013e328345c956 | PMID=21483267|}}</ref>
<ref name="pmid21600348">{{cite journal |author=Corkum P, Davidson F, Macpherson M |title=A framework for the assessment and treatment of sleep problems in children with attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder |journal=Pediatr. Clin. North Am. |volume=58 |issue=3 |pages=667–83 |year=2011 |month=June |pmid=21600348|doi=10.1016/j.pcl.2011.03.004 |url=}}</ref>
<ref name="pmid19096296">{{cite journal |author=Shreeram S, He JP, Kalaydjian A, Brothers S, Merikangas KR |title=Prevalence of enuresis and its association with attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder among U.S. children: results from a nationally representative study |journal=J Am Acad Child Adolesc Psychiatry |volume=48 |issue=1 |pages=35–41 |year=2009 |month=January |pmid=19096296|pmc=2794242 |doi=10.1097/CHI.0b013e318190045c |url=}}</ref>
<ref name="pmid22186361">{{cite journal |author=Fliers EA, Franke B, Buitelaar JK |title=[Motor problems in children with ADHD receive too little attention in clinical practice] |language=Dutch; Flemish |journal=Ned Tijdschr Geneeskd |volume=155 |issue=50 |pages=A3559 |year=2011 |pmid=22186361|doi= |url=}}</ref>
<ref name="pmid19713073">{{cite journal |author=Hagberg BS, Miniscalco C, Gillberg C |title=Clinic attenders with autism or attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder: cognitive profile at school age and its relationship to preschool indicators of language delay |journal=Res Dev Disabil |volume=31 |issue=1 |pages=1–8 |year=2010 |pmid=19713073|doi=10.1016/j.ridd.2009.07.012 |url=}}</ref>
Y
Y
PMID19713073: Comparative Study; although this study's results would be a primary source if used, the article is only used for its background discussion, which is secondary for the purpose used
<ref name="Brunsvold">{{Cite journal|author=Brunsvold GL, Oepen G |title=Comorbid Depression in ADHD: Children and Adolescents |journal=Psychiatric Times |volume=25 |issue=10|year=2008 |url=http://www.psychiatrictimes.com/adhd/article/10168/1286863}}</ref>
Y (REMOVED from article)
<ref name=smfttadhdebp>{{Cite journal| last = Bailly | first = Lionel | year = 2005 | title = Stimulant medication for the treatment of attention-deficit hyperactivity disorder: evidence-b(i)ased practice? | journal = Psychiatric Bulletin | volume = 29 | issue = 8 | pages = 284–287 | publisher = The Royal College of Psychiatrists| doi = 10.1192/pb.29.8.284 | url = | format = Full text | quote = }}</ref>
N
style="background: #EEE; vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Unknown" | ? The content that this article/reference is supporting seems neutral and non-controversial - not sure there is a problem here?--MrADHD | T@1k? 16:38, 9 June 2013 (UTC) Removed and replaced with a better reference and content adjusted accordingly. Resolved.--MrADHD | T@1k? 23:12, 27 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
This article is presented as "Opinion and debate", can you find a source that provides a review without trying to argue a side?
<ref>{{cite web|url=http://www.continuingedcourses.net/active/courses/course003.php|title=Attention-Deficit/Hyperactivity Disorder: Nature, Course, Outcomes, and Comorbidity|last=Barkley|first=Russel A.|accessdate=2006-06-26| archiveurl= http://web.archive.org/web/20060708212749/http://www.continuingedcourses.net/active/courses/course003.php?PHPSESSID=f9475dca7e56685b896a230bd38212a0| archivedate= 8 July 2006 <!--DASHBot-->| deadurl= no}}</ref>
<ref name="pmid21432600">{{cite journal |author=Arcos-Burgos M, Muenke M |title=Toward a better understanding of ADHD: LPHN3 gene variants and the susceptibility to develop ADHD |journal=Atten Defic Hyperact Disord |volume=2 |issue=3 |pages=139–47 |year=2010 |month=November |pmid=21432600|pmc=3280610 |doi=10.1007/s12402-010-0030-2 |url=}}</ref>
<ref name ="Elliott">{{cite journal|author=Elliott R |year=2003 |title=Executive functions and their disorders |journal=British Medical Bulletin |issue=65 |pages=49–59}}</ref>
Y
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PMID12697616: Review; 2003 is relatively old but it's just being used for a very basic definition
<ref>{{cite journal|author=Chan RCK, Shum D, Toulopoulou T, Chen EYH |title=Assessment of executive functions: Review of instruments and identification of critical issues|journal=Archives of Clinical Neuropsychology|year=2008|volume=23|series=2|issue=2|pages=201–216|doi=10.1016/j.acn.2007.08.010|pmid=18096360|first1=R|last2=Shum|first2=D|last3=Toulopoulou|first3=T|last4=Chen|first4=E}}</ref>
<ref name="Willcutt_2005">{{Cite journal | last1 = Willcutt | first1 = EG. | last2 = Doyle | first2 = AE. | last3 = Nigg | first3 = JT. | last4 = Faraone | first4 = SV. | last5 = Pennington | first5 = BF. | title = Validity of the executive function theory of attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder: a meta-analytic review. | url =http://psych.colorado.edu/~willcutt/pdfs/Willcutt_2005_BP.pdf | format = PDF | journal = Biol Psychiatry | volume = 57 | issue = 11 | pages = 1336–46 | month = Jun | year = 2005 | doi = 10.1016/j.biopsych.2005.02.006 | PMID=15950006|}}</ref>
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PMID15950006: Meta-Analysis, Review; not sure about this, used to source " One of the primary neuropsychologic theories of ADHD suggests..." but the paper is from 2005, is that still the primary such theories? otherwise OK <--- Y I have used a newer reference for this statement. The reference is still in use for less controversial text. Is that okay?--MrADHD | T@1k? 18:50, 16 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref>{{cite journal | pmid=20406332| title=Validating neuropsychological subtypes of ADHD: how do children with and without an executive function deficit differ? | author=Lambek R, Tannock R, Dalsgaard S, Trillingsgaard A, Damm D, Thomsen PH | journal=Journal of Child Psychology and Psychiatry | year=2010 | volume=51 | issue=8 | pages=895–904 | doi=10.1111/j.1469-7610.2010.02248.x}}</ref>
<ref name="pmid20200842">{{cite journal |author=Cardo E, Nevot A, Redondo M, ''et al.'' |title=El déficit de atención desorganiza e hiperactividad: ¿un modelo de evolución? |trans_title=Attention deficit disorder and hyperactivity: a pattern of evolution? |language=Spanish; Castilian |journal=Rev Neurol |volume=50 Suppl 3 |issue= |pages=S143–7 |year=2010 |month=March |pmid=20200842|}}</ref>
In Spanish. Maybe English source could be found. Title has been translated. True title (from journal page) is
Trastorno por déficit de atención/hiperactividad: ¿un patrón evolutivo? and should be changed or given in English as it appears in pubmed as done in the other Rev Neurol article--Garrondo (talk) 06:53, 8 May 2013 (UTC)
Fixed it myself.--Garrondo (talk) 10:24, 26 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref name="pmid_16849269">{{Cite journal|author=Williams J, Taylor E |title=The evolution of hyperactivity, impulsivity and cognitive diversity |journal=J R Soc Interface |volume=3|issue=8 |pages=399–413 |year=2006 |month=June |pmid=16849269|pmc=1578754 |doi=10.1098/rsif.2005.0102 |url=}}</ref>
<ref name="pmid21250994">{{cite journal |author=Glover V |title=Annual Research Review: Prenatal stress and the origins of psychopathology: an evolutionary perspective |journal=J Child Psychol Psychiatry |volume=52 |issue=4 |pages=356–67 |year=2011 |month=April |pmid=21250994|doi=10.1111/j.1469-7610.2011.02371.x |url=}}</ref>
<ref name="Chen_1999">{{cite journal | author = Chen CS, Burton M, Greenberger E, Dmitrieva J | title = Population migration and the variation of dopamine D4 receptor (DRD4) allele frequencies around the globe | journal = Evolution and Human Behavior | volume = 20 | issue = 5 | pages = 309–324 | year = 1999 | month = September | pmid = | doi = 10.1016/S1090-5138(99)00015-X | url = }}</ref>
<ref>{{cite journal|title=Prenatal smoking exposure and dopaminergic genotypes interact to cause a severe ADHD subtype
|author=Neuman RJ, Lobos E, Reich W, Henderson CA, Sun LW, Todd RD |journal=Biol Psychiatry|date=2007 Jun 15|volume=61|issue=12|pages=1320–8|pmid=17157268|laysummary=http://www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2007/04/070410190421.htm }}</ref>
<ref name="Weiss_2012">{{Cite journal | last1 = Weiss | first1 = B. | title = Synthetic food colours and neurobehavioral hazards: the view from environmental health research. | journal = Environ Health Perspect | volume = 120 | issue = 1 | pages = 1–5 | month = Jan | year = 2012 | doi = 10.1289/ehp.1103827 | PMID=21926033|}}</ref>
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PMID21926033: commentary; as this is a "commentary" it should be attributed to Weiss in-article. <---- Y done.--MrADHD | T@1k? 17:02, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref name="Kleinman_2011">{{Cite journal | last1 = Kleinman | first1 = RE | last2 = Brown | first2 = RT | last3 = Cutter | first3 = GR | last4 = Dupaul | first4 = GJ | last5 = Clydesdale | first5 = FM | title = A research model for investigating the effects of artificial food colorings on children with ADHD | journal = Pediatrics | volume = 127 | issue = 6 | pages = e1575-84 | month = Jun | year = 2011 | doi = 10.1542/peds.2009-2206 | pmid=21576306|}}</ref>
<ref>{{cite web |url=http://www.food.gov.uk/multimedia/pdfs/publication/guidelinessotonsixcolours.pdf |title=Guidelines on approaches to the replacement of Tartrazine, Allura Red, Ponceau 4R, Quinoline Yellow, Sunset Yellow and Carmoisine in food and beverages |author=Sarah Chapman |month=March |year=2011 |publisher=[[Food Standards Agency]] |location=United Kingdom |format=PDF }}</ref>
<ref>{{cite web|url=http://www.euro.who.int/document/MNH/ebrief14.pdf |format=PDF |title=Mental health of children and adolescents |date=12–15 January 2005 |accessdate=13 October 2011|archiveurl=http://web.archive.org/web/20091024102724/http://www.euro.who.int/document/MNH/ebrief14.pdf|archivedate=24 October 2009}}</ref>
<ref>{{cite web |title=What keeps children in foster care from succeeding in school? |author=Marni Finkelstein, Mark Wamsley, Doreen Miranda |month=July |year=2002 |publisher= VERA Institute of Justice |url=http://www.vera.org/sites/default/files/resources/downloads/School_success.pdf |format=PDF |archiveurl=http://web.archive.org/web/20080306234634/http://www.vera.org/publication_pdf/169_280.pdf |archivedate=2008-03-06}}</ref>
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Would like to see this attributed in-line. <--- attributed to who? The three researchers by name? Is that not too wordy? Or do you mean the institute?--MrADHD | T@1k? 17:04, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref>{{cite web |url=http://www.psychminded.co.uk/news/news2004/august04/Clinical%20psychology%20publishes%20critique%20of%20ADHD%20diagnosis%20and%20use%20of%20medication%20on%20children.htm |title=Clinical psychology publishes critique of ADHD diagnosis and use of medication on children |author=Adam James |year=2004 |publisher=Psychminded Ltd |location=United Kingdom }}</ref>
Not convinced Adam James at "psychminded.com" is an authoritative expert; one of two sources, is this needed?
<ref>{{cite journal | url=http://cjs.sagepub.com/content/27/2/166.short | title=Neuropsychological Effects of Posttraumatic Stress Disorder in Children and Adolescents | author=Matthew R. Turley John E. Obrzut | journal=Canadian Journal of School Psychology | year=2012 | volume=27 | issue=2 | pages=166–182 | doi=10.1177/0829573512440420}}</ref>
This journal is not MEDLINE indexed (not even NLM cataloged) and its domain is school psychology, it seems to be publishing outside its domain, can a better source be found?
<ref>{{Cite journal|author=Parens E, Johnston J |title=Facts, values, and Attention-Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder (ADHD): an update on the controversies |journal=Child Adolesc Psychiatry Ment Health |volume=3 |issue=1 |page=1 |year=2009 |pmid=19152690|pmc=2637252 |doi=10.1186/1753-2000-3-1 |url=}}</ref>
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PMID19152690: commentary; should probably be attributed to the Hastings Center in-line. <--- Are you sure? It is not the viewpoint of Hastings Center - all they did was host a workshop.--MrADHD | T@1k? 17:08, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref>{{Cite book|author=Chriss, James J.|title=Social control: an introduction |publisher=Polity |location=Cambridge, UK |year=2007 |page=230 |isbn=0-7456-3858-9 }}</ref>
<ref>{{Cite book|author=Szasz, Thomas Stephen |title=Pharmacracy: medicine and politics in America |publisher=Praeger |location=New York |year=2001 |page=212 |isbn=0-275-97196-1 }}</ref>
<ref>{{cite web|url=http://www.uptodate.com/online/content/topic.do?topicKey=behavior/8293&selectedTitle=4~150&source=search_result |publisher=uptodate.com |title=Evaluation and diagnosis of attention deficit hyperactivity disorder in children |accessdate=2008-09-15 |date=5 December 2007}}</ref>
PMID15949999: Review; OK for how it's used but it's from 2005, can't anything newer be found? <---- Y done. I have added a newer source.--MrADHD | T@1k? 17:44, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref name="pmid22294258">{{cite journal |author=Fusar-Poli P, Rubia K, Rossi G, Sartori G, Balottin U |title=Striatal dopamine transporter alterations in ADHD: pathophysiology or adaptation to psychostimulants? A meta-analysis |journal=Am J Psychiatry |volume=169 |issue=3 |pages=264–72 |year=2012 |month=March |pmid=22294258|doi=10.1176/appi.ajp.2011.11060940 |url=}}</ref>
<ref>{{Cite journal |title=Longitudinal Mapping of Cortical Thickness and Clinical Outcome in Children and Adolescents With Attention-Deficit/Hyperactivity Disorder |journal=Arch Gen Psychiatry |volume=5 |issue=63 |pages=540–549 |year=2006 |pmid=16651511|doi=10.1001/archpsyc.63.5.540 |author1=Philip Shaw, MD |author2=Jason Lerch, PhD |author3=Deanna Greenstein, PhD |author4=Wendy Sharp, MSW |author5=Liv Clasen, PhD |author6=Alan Evans, PhD |author7=Jay Giedd, MD |author8=F. Xavier Castellanos, MD |author9=Judith Rapoport, MD |displayauthors=9}}</ref>
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PMID16651511: Comparative Study; primary source doesn't appear to mention Leo or Cohen in ref, no secondary source used to establish notability of opinion; possible WP:INTEGRITY issues, ref appears to be applied to wrong thing, check this paragraph and application of refs
<ref name=autogenerated5>{{Cite journal|author=David Cohen |title=An Update on ADHD Neuroimaging Research |journal=The Journal of Mind and Behavior |volume=25 |issue=2 |pages=161–166 |year=2004 |publisher=The Institute of Mind and Behavior, Inc |issn =0271–0137 |url=http://psychrights.org/research/Digest/NLPs/neruoimagingupdate.pdf |format=PDF |accessdate=2009-05-25}}</ref>
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possible WP:INTEGRITY issues, ref appears to be applied to wrong thing, check this paragraph and application of refs; no secondary source used to establish notability of opinion
<ref>{{Cite journal|author=David Cohen |title=Broken brains or flawed studies? A critical review of ADHD neuroimaging studies |journal=The Journal of Mind and Behavior |volume=24 |pages=29–56 |year=2003 |url= }}</ref>
Don't understand what's going on here, the ref lists author as "Jessica Andersson", but the linked article doesn't mention that name; the article is used to support content about imaging, but the article does not talk about imaging
<ref name="Elder_2010">{{Cite journal | last1 = Elder | first1 = TE. | title = The importance of relative standards in ADHD diagnoses: evidence based on exact birth dates. | journal = J Health Econ | volume = 29 | issue = 5 | pages = 641–56 | month = Sep | year = 2010 | doi = 10.1016/j.jhealeco.2010.06.003 | PMID=20638739|pmc=2933294}}</ref>
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PMID20638739: research paper; this is a primary source, should be used with attribution in-article. <---Attribute it to the named researcher?--MrADHD | T@1k? 18:07, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref name="pmid21991721">{{cite journal |author=Berger I |title=Diagnosis of attention deficit hyperactivity disorder: much ado about something |url=http://www.ima.org.il/imaj/ar11sep-13.pdf |format=PDF |journal=Isr. Med. Assoc. J. |volume=13 |issue=9 |pages=571–4 |year=2011 |month=September |pmid=21991721|doi= }}</ref>
<ref name=NICE2008>{{cite web|url=http://www.nice.org.uk/nicemedia/pdf/CG72FullGuideline.pdf |format=PDF|title=CG72 Attention deficit hyperactivity disorder (ADHD): full guideline |publisher=NHS |author=National Institute for Health and Clinical Excellence|authorlink=National Institute for Health and Clinical Excellence |date=24 September 2008 }}</ref>
<ref>{{cite web|url=http://www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2007/11/071112172200.htm |title=Brain Matures A Few Years Late In ADHD, But Follows Normal Pattern |publisher=Sciencedaily.com |date=13 November 2007 |accessdate=2009-05-25|archiveurl=http://web.archive.org/web/20090429032715/http://www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2007/11/071112172200.htm|archivedate= 29 April 2009 <!--DASHBot-->| deadurl= no}}</ref>
per WP:MEDRS we don't cite the popular-press coverage of the study result (not even ScienceDaily), and this looks primary; can you find the underlying study's PMID? Might be one of these. <---Y done - removed - resolved.--MrADHD | T@1k? 21:21, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref name=autogenerated10>{{Cite book|author=Wiener, Jerry M., Editor |title=Textbook Of Child & Adolescent Psychiatry|publisher=American Psychiatric Association |location=Washington, DC |year=2003|isbn=1-58562-057-2 |url=http://books.google.co.uk/books?id=EIgGKcp0SpkC |oclc= }}</ref>
<ref name=DSM_IV_TR>{{cite book |author= |title=Diagnostic and statistical manual of mental disorders: DSM-IV |publisher=American Psychiatric Association |location=Washington, DC |year=2000|pages=|isbn=0-89042-025-4 |oclc= |doi= |accessdate=}}</ref>
<ref name=ICD10>{{cite web |url=http://apps.who.int/classifications/icd10/browse/2010/en#/F90 |title=International Statistical Classification of Diseases and Related Health Problems 10th Revision (ICD-10) Version for 2010 |year=2010 |publisher=World Health Organisation }}</ref>
It links to the specific section of "Hyperkinetic disorders" (F90) from the ICD-10. There migh be a better way of citing it to make this clear.--Garrondo (talk) 09:16, 8 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref name=AAP2001>{{Cite journal|author=American Academy of Pediatrics. Subcommittee on Attention-Deficit/Hyperactivity Disorder and Committee on Quality Improvement |title=Clinical practice guideline: treatment of the school-aged child with attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder |journal=Pediatrics |volume=108 |issue=4 |pages=1033–44 |year=2001 |month=October |pmid=11581465|doi=10.1542/peds.108.4.1033 }}</ref>
PMID11581465: Guideline, Practice Guideline; this is the old 2001 guideline, it looks like it has since been updated in 2011, see PMID22003063, please update the article as necessary. <--- Y resolved - I have updated to the new guidance. :-)--MrADHD | T@1k? 20:47, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref name="Kooij_2010">{{Cite journal |last1=Kooij |first1=SJ. |last2=Bejerot |first2=S. |last3=Blackwell |first3=A. |last4=Caci |first4=H. |last5=Casas-Brugué |first5=M. |last6=Carpentier |first6=PJ. |last7=Edvinsson |first7=D. |last8=Fayyad |first8=J. |last9=Foeken |first9=K. |title=European consensus statement on diagnosis and treatment of adult ADHD: The European Network Adult ADHD |url = http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2942810/ |journal=BMC Psychiatry |volume=10 |pages=67 |year=2010 |doi=10.1186/1471-244X-10-67 |PMID=20815868|displayauthors=9}}</ref>
<ref name=AACAP>{{cite web |url=http://www.aacap.org/cs/adhd_a_guide_for_families/what_is_adhd |title=ADHD – A Guide for Families |year=2010 |publisher=American Academy of Child Adolescent Psychiatry |location=USA }}</ref>
<ref name="pmid11563573">{{Cite journal|author=Smucker WD, Hedayat M |title=Evaluation and treatment of ADHD |journal=American Family Physician |volume=64 |issue=5 |pages=817–29 |year=2001 |month=September |pmid=11563573|url=http://www.aafp.org/afp/20010901/817.html}}</ref>
PMID11563573: Review; isn't 2001 a bit old, aren't there more recent reviews that can be used? Why not use AAP 2011? <--Removed reference and added a newer one and reworded.--MrADHD | T@1k? 23:15, 27 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref name=Owens2008>{{Cite journal|author=Owens JA |title=Sleep disorders and attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder |journal=Current Psychiatry Reports |volume=10 |issue=5 |pages=439–44 |year=2008 |month=October |pmid=18803919|doi=10.1007/s11920-008-0070-x}}</ref>
<ref>{{Cite journal|author=Walters AS, Silvestri R, Zucconi M, Chandrashekariah R, Konofal E |title=Review of the possible relationship and hypothetical links between attention deficit hyperactivity disorder (ADHD) and the simple sleep related movement disorders, parasomnias, hypersomnias, and circadian rhythm disorders |journal=Journal of Clinical Sleep Medicine |volume=4 |issue=6 |pages=591–600 |year=2008 |month=December |pmid=19110891|pmc=2603539}}</ref>
<ref name=Owens2005>{{Cite journal|author=Owens JA |title=The ADHD and sleep conundrum: a review |journal=Journal of Developmental and Behavioral Pediatrics |volume=26 |issue=4 |pages=312–22 |year=2005 |month=August |pmid=16100507|doi=10.1097/00004703-200508000-00011}}</ref>
<ref>{{Cite book|last= Hirshkowitz |first= Max |editor= Yudofsky, Stuart C. and Robert E. Hales, editors |others= |title= Essentials of neuropsychiatry and clinical neurosciences |origdate= |origyear= |origmonth= |url= |format= Google Books preview includes entire chapter 10 |edition= 4 |series= |year= 2004 |publisher= American Psychiatric Publishing |location= Arlington, Virginia, USA |isbn= 978-1-58562-005-0 |oclc= |id= |pages=315–40 |chapter=Neuropsychiatric Aspects of Sleep and Sleep Disorders |chapterurl=http://books.google.no/books?id=XKhu7yb3QtsC&pg=PA315&lpg=PA315&dq=%22Max+Hirshkowitz%22&source=bl&ots=Rt5ZMiMbxt&sig=7upt8PudAdiA5f9kk5KGsrfaMQU&hl=no&ei=y-0bS7vFKtTP-QabhdTaDw&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=3&ved=0CBIQ6AEwAjgK#v=onepage&q=%22Max%20Hirshkowitz%22&f=false |quote= }}</ref>
PMID20861593: Review - DUPLICATE please combine with other one. <---Y done.--MrADHD | T@1k? 21:10, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref>{{cite web|title=Canadian ADHD Practice Guidelines|url=http://www.caddra.ca/cms4/pdfs/caddraGuidelines2011Chapter07.pdf|work=Canadian ADHD Alliance|accessdate=4 February 2011}}</ref>
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<ref>{{cite journal|last=Nigg|first=JT|coauthors=Lewis, K; Edinger, T; Falk, M|title=Meta-analysis of attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder or attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder symptoms, restriction diet, and synthetic food color additives.|journal=Journal of the American Academy of Child and Adolescent Psychiatry|date=2012 Jan|volume=51|issue=1|pages=86–97.e8|pmid=22176942|}}</ref>
<ref name=Clinics09>{{cite journal |author=Kratochvil CJ, Vaughan BS, Barker A, Corr L, Wheeler A, Madaan V |title=Review of pediatric attention deficit/hyperactivity disorder for the general psychiatrist |journal=Psychiatr. Clin. North Am. |volume=32 |issue=1 |pages=39–56 |year=2009 |month=March |pmid=19248915|doi=10.1016/j.psc.2008.10.001 |url=}}</ref>
<ref>{{cite journal|last=Arns|first=M|coauthors=de Ridder, S, Strehl, U, Breteler, M, Coenen, A|title=Efficacy of neurofeedback treatment in ADHD: the effects on inattention, impulsivity and hyperactivity: a meta-analysis|journal=Clinical EEG and neuroscience : official journal of the EEG and Clinical Neuroscience Society (ENCS)|date=July 2009|volume=40|issue=3|pages=180–9|pmid=19715181|}}</ref>
<ref>{{Cite journal| issn = 1758-0854| volume = 3| issue = 3| pages = 281–303| last = Faber Taylor| first = Andrea| coauthors = Frances E. Kuo| title = Could Exposure to Everyday Green Spaces Help Treat ADHD? Evidence from Children's Play Settings| journal = Applied Psychology: Health and Well‐Being| date = 1 November 2011| doi =10.1111/j.1758-0854.2011.01052.x}}</ref>
Primary source; This doesn't appear to be PubMed cataloged and it's used to discuss a disease treatment. <---Y done - removed.--MrADHD | T@1k? 21:17, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref>{{cite web|last=Kuo|first=Frances|title=Green Play Settings Reduce ADHD Symptoms|url=http://lhhl.illinois.edu/adhd.htm}}</ref>
Primary source; This doesn't appear to be PubMed cataloged and it's used to discuss a disease treatment; However, Kuo has published something on this that IS PubMed indexed, consider PMID15333318 (although that is primary). <--Y done.--MrADHD | T@1k? 21:16, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref>{{Cite journal|author=Pliszka S |title=Practice parameter for the assessment and treatment of children and adolescents with attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder |journal=Journal of the American Academy of Child and Adolescent Psychiatry |volume=46 |issue=7 |pages=894–921 |year=2007 |month=July |pmid=17581453|doi=10.1097/chi.0b013e318054e724 |author2=AACAP Work Group on Quality Issues}}</ref>
<ref>{{cite web|url=http://www.cochrane.org/reviews/en/ab005042.html|title=Family therapy for attention-deficit disorder or attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder in children and adolescents |accessdate=2008-09-19 |author=Bjornstad GJ, Montgomery P|publisher=The Cochrane Collaboration |date=20 April 2005 }}</ref>
<ref>{{Cite journal|author=Greenhill LL, Posner K, Vaughan BS, Kratochvil CJ |title=Attention deficit hyperactivity disorder in preschool children |journal=Child and Adolescent Psychiatric Clinics of North America |volume=17 |issue=2 |pages=347–66, ix |year=2008 |month=April |pmid=18295150|doi=10.1016/j.chc.2007.11.004}}</ref>
<ref name="hta.ac.uk">{{Cite journal|author=King S, Griffin S, Hodges Z |title=A systematic review and economic model of the effectiveness and cost-effectiveness of methylphenidate, dexamfetamine and atomoxetine for the treatment of attention deficit hyperactivity disorder in children and adolescents |journal=Health Technology Assessment |volume=10 |issue=23 |pages=iii–iv, xiii–146 |year=2006 |month=July |pmid=16796929|url=http://www.hta.ac.uk/execsumm/summ1023.htm}}</ref>
PMID16796929: Review; this is from 2006, used to support time-sensitive content talking about the current state of research knowledge, hasn't there been a more recent review? <---Y done.--MrADHD | T@1k? 21:19, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref>{{cite journal|last=Mosholder|first=AD|coauthors=Gelperin, K, Hammad, TA, Phelan, K, Johann-Liang, R|title=Hallucinations and other psychotic symptoms associated with the use of attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder drugs in children|journal=Pediatrics|date=February 2009|volume=123|issue=2|pages=611–6|pmid=19171629|doi=10.1542/peds.2008-0185}}</ref>
<ref name="pmid20571380">{{cite journal |author=Kraemer M, Uekermann J, Wiltfang J, Kis B |title=Methylphenidate-induced psychosis in adult attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder: report of 3 new cases and review of the literature |journal=Clin Neuropharmacol |volume=33 |issue=4 |pages=204–6 |year=2010 |month=July |pmid=20571380|doi=10.1097/WNF.0b013e3181e29174 }}</ref>
<ref>{{cite book |last1=Medical Association |first1=British |authorlink1=British Medical Association |title=British National Formulary |edition=54 |year=2007 |month=September |publisher=[[Royal Pharmaceutical Society of Great Britain]] |location=UK |isbn=978-0-85369-736-7 |page=212 |chapter=4 }}</ref>
note it'd be nice if you could fill in the full name of the chapter, instead of just "4". <---Y done. :-)--MrADHD | T@1k? 21:25, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref>{{cite web|url=http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/books/NBK47127/|title=Black box
warnings of ADHD drugs approved by the US Food and Drug Administration|year=2009|author=Oregon Health & Science University, Portland, Oregon|publisher=U.S. National Library of Medicine}}</ref>
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Need to accurify to source here: the source only makes a general statement about amphetamines, not all stimulants; consider "Additionally, stimulant medications approved for treating ADHD have the potential for abuse and dependence."?
<ref>{{cite web|title=Canadian ADHD Practice Guidelines|url=http://www.caddra.ca/cms4/pdfs/caddraGuidelines2011Introduction.pdf|work=Canadian ADHD Alliance|accessdate=4 February 2011}}</ref>
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<ref name="Dodig_Curkovic_2009">{{Cite journal | last1 = Dodig-Curković | first1 = K. | last2 = Dovhanj | first2 = J. | last3 = Curković | first3 = M. | last4 = Dodig-Radić | first4 = J. | last5 = Degmecić | first5 = D. | title = [The role of zinc in the treatment of hyperactivity disorder in children]. | journal = Acta Med Croatica | volume = 63 | issue = 4 | pages = 307–13 | month = Oct | year = 2009 | doi = | PMID=20034331|}}</ref>
PMID20034331: Review => can you replace this with PMID22232312 ?? it's a much more reputable journal. <--Y done, deleted.--MrADHD | T@1k? 21:23, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref name=Molina2009>{{Cite journal|author=Molina BS, Hinshaw SP, Swanson JM, et al |title=The MTA at 8 years: prospective follow-up of children treated for combined-type ADHD in a multisite study |journal=Journal of the American Academy of Child and Adolescent Psychiatry |volume=48 |issue=5 |pages=484–500 |year=2009 |month=May |pmid=19318991|pmc=3063150 |doi=10.1097/CHI.0b013e31819c23d0}}</ref>
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PMID19318991: Multicenter Study, Randomized Controlled Trial; primary source from 2009, can't you find a more recent review that incorporates this? either way, can't use a primary study to make unqualified statement, if you can't find a review you have to qualify the article content to the source
<ref>{{cite news |title=Ritalin gone wrong |author= Sroufe LA |url=http://www.nytimes.com/2012/01/29/opinion/sunday/childrens-add-drugs-dont-work-long-term.html |newspaper= New York Times |date=28 January 2012 |accessdate=2012-01-29}}</ref>
this is very old; my reading of it says 35% and not 50% don't complete HS, and it doesn't appear to be the 1994 source cited... <---Y Deleted per problems with this reference.--MrADHD | T@1k? 21:04, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref name="adhd_superman">{{Cite book| last = Cimera| first = Robert| title = Making ADHD a gift: teaching Superman how to fly| publisher = Scarecrow Press, Inc.| year = 2002 | location = Lanham, Maryland| page = 116| url = http://www.rowmaneducation.com/Catalog/SingleBook.shtml?command=Search&db=^DB/CATALOG.db&eqSKUdata=0810843196| isbn = 0-8108-4318-8| accessdate = 2009-05-02}}</ref>
{{dead link}}; isn't the article content this is supporting also supported by the "eric.ed.gov" document? <--- I removed the eric.ed.gov link and I found the working URL for this book and added it to the reference so this issue is resolved.--MrADHD | T@1k? 21:04, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref name="us_census_2005">{{cite web|url=http://www.census.gov/Press-Release/www/releases/archives/education/004214.html|title=College Degree Nearly Doubles Annual Earnings, Census Bureau Reports|accessdate=2 October 2008|archiveurl=http://web.archive.org/web/20050330044033/http://www.census.gov/Press-Release/www/releases/archives/education/004214.html|archivedate=30 March 2005}}</ref>
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source doesn't quite says what article says, source says 28% of those 25 or older self-reported at least a bachelors. <---Y Done.--MrADHD | T@1k? 21:01, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref name="Jensen PS, Arnold LE, Swanson JM 2007 989_1002">{{Cite journal|author=Jensen PS, Arnold LE, Swanson JM |title=3-year follow-up of the NIMH MTA study |journal=Journal of the American Academy of Child and Adolescent Psychiatry |volume=46 |issue=8 |pages=989–1002 |year=2007 |month=August |pmid=17667478|doi=10.1097/CHI.0b013e3180686d48}}</ref>
<ref name=TI2008>{{cite web|url=http://www.ti.ubc.ca/letter69 |title=What is the evidence for using CNS stimulants to treat ADHD in children? | Therapeutics Initiative |archiveurl=http://web.archive.org/web/20100906205955/http://www.ti.ubc.ca/letter69|archivedate=6 September 2010}}</ref>
<ref name=Balint2008>{{Cite journal|author=Bálint S, Czobor P, Mészáros A, Simon V, Bitter I |title=[Neuropsychological impairments in adult attention deficit hyperactivity disorder: a literature review] |language=Hungarian |journal=Psychiatr Hung |volume=23|issue=5 |pages=324–35 |year=2008 |pmid=19129549|url=}}</ref>
<ref name="Polanczyk">{{Cite journal|author=Polanczyk G, de Lima MS, Horta BL, Biederman J, Rohde LA |title=The worldwide prevalence of ADHD: a systematic review and metaregression analysis |journal=The American Journal of Psychiatry |volume=164 |issue=6 |pages=942–8 |year=2007 |month=June |pmid=17541055|doi=10.1176/appi.ajp.164.6.942}}</ref>
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PMID17541055: Meta-Analysis, Review; pls use this from the source "this variability seems to be explained primarily by the methodological characteristics of studies" - I think they're saying that kids everywhere have ADHD but diagnostic criteria aren't being applied uniformly? <--- Y done. :-)--MrADHD | T@1k? 21:00, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref name="autogenerated4">{{cite web|url=http://www.loni.ucla.edu/Research/Projects/ADHD.shtml#CurrentResearch |title=LONI: Laboratory of Neuro Imaging |accessdate=2008-09-19 | archiveurl= http://web.archive.org/web/20080906160442/http://www.loni.ucla.edu/Research/Projects/ADHD.shtml| archivedate=6 September 2008 | deadurl= no}}</ref>
<ref>{{cite web|url=http://www.cdc.gov/ncbddd/ADHD/ |title=ADHD Home |author=Centers for Disease Control and Prevention |authorlink=Centers for Disease Control and Prevention |date=October 17, 2013 |publisher=CDC.gov |location=USA }}</ref>
<ref>{{cite web |url=http://www.cdc.gov/nchs/data/series/sr_10/sr10_221.pdf |format=PDF |title=Summary Health Statistics for U.S. Children: National Health Interview Survey, 2002 |author=CDC.gov |month=March |year=2004 |series=10 Number 221 |publisher=CDC.gov |location=USA }}</ref>
<ref>{{cite journal |year=2001 |month=May |title=An early description of ADHD (inattentive subtype): Dr Alexander Crichton and 'Mental restlessness' (1798) |volume=6 |issue=2 |pages=66–73 |authors=Palmer ED, Finger S |journal=Child and Adolescent Mental Health |doi=10.1111/1475-3588.00324 }}</ref>
<ref>{{cite book |last1=Crichton |first1=Andrew |title=An inquiry into the nature and origin of mental derangement: comprehending a concise system of the physiology and pathology of the human mind and a history of the passions and their effects |url=http://books.google.co.uk/books/about/An_inquiry_into_the_nature_and_origin_of.html?id=OMAtAAAAYAAJ |year=1798 |publisher=AMS Press |location=United Kingdom |page=271 }}</ref>
<ref>{{cite web |author=Bland J |year=2002
|title=About gender: testosterone and aggression – childhood |url=http://www.gender.org.uk/about/06encrn/63gaggrs.htm }}</ref>
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looks WP:SELFPUBLISHED, could only find support for "minimal brain disorder" but not the others; this is unneeded, just use Millichap. <---Y done. Resolved. :-)--MrADHD | T@1k? 20:57, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref>{{cite book |last1=Millichap |first1=J. Gordon |title=Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder Handbook |url=http://books.google.co.uk/books?id=CTWLzYgQWqEC&pg=PA2 |type= |edition= |series= |volume= |year=2010 |month=April |publisher=Springer Verlag Gmbh |isbn=978-1-4419-1409-5 |pages=2–3 |chapter=1. Definition and History of ADHD }}</ref>
<ref>{{cite web|url=http://today.msnbc.msn.com/id/8343367 |title='I'm passionate about life'|publisher=msnbc.msn.com|date=25 June 2005 |accessdate=2012-01-29}}</ref>
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this video of Tom Cruise is a primary source and can't establish his rantings opinions are notable, just replace this with a secondary source covering it, try PMID16075033 <---Y done.--MrADHD | T@1k? 20:51, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref>{{Cite news|url=http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/health/7093944.stm |title=Peer calls for ADHD care review |publisher=BBC News |date=14 November 2007 |accessdate=2012-01-29}}</ref>
<ref>{{cite news |title=BBC must broadcast apology over inaccurate Panorama programme |author=Singh A |url=http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/7307972/BBC-must-broadcast-apology-over-inaccurate-Panorama-programme.html |newspaper=The Telegraph |date=25 February 2010 |accessdate=2012-01-29}}</ref>
You're far too kind here! The article could put a sharper point on this without editorializing. <--- Y done - I think - I have updated the text as suggested.--MrADHD | T@1k? 20:49, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref>{{PDFlink|[http://www.incb.org/pdf/e/list/green.pdf Green List: Annex to the annual statistical report on psychotropic substances (form P)]|1.63 MB}} 23rd edition. August 2003. International Narcotics Board, Vienna International Centre. Retrieved 2 March 2006</ref>
{{dead link}} <--- resolved by replacing with more recent version of this green paper.--MrADHD | T@1k? 18:13, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref name="pmid18384709">{{cite journal |author=Kollins SH |title=A qualitative review of issues arising in the use of psycho-stimulant medications in patients with ADHD and co-morbid substance use disorders |journal=Curr Med Res Opin |volume=24 |issue=5 |pages=1345–57 |year=2008 |month=May |pmid=18384709|doi=10.1185/030079908X280707 |url=}}</ref>
<ref>{{cite web |url=http://www.homeoffice.gov.uk/drugs/drug-law/ |title=Drugs and the law |author=Home Office |authorlink=Home Office |year=2010 |work=The Misuse of Drugs Act |publisher=HomeOffice.gov.uk |location=United Kingdom }}</ref>
<ref>{{cite web |url=http://docs.health.vic.gov.au/docs/doc/137F8D140900404ACA25797C00019C1A/$FILE/Schedule%208%20permit%20requirements%20plus%20notification%20requirements.doc |title=Information for medical practitioners |author=Department of Health |authorlink=Department of Health and Ageing |month=September |year=2010 |publisher=Australian Government |location=Australia |format=DOC }}</ref>
<ref>{{Cite journal|author=Lakhan, SE; Hagger-Johnson, GE |title=The impact of prescribed psychotropics on youth |journal=Clin Pract Epidemol Ment Health |volume=3 |issue= 1|page=21 |year=2007 |pmid=17949504|pmc=2100041 |doi=10.1186/1745-0179-3-21 |url=http://www.cpementalhealth.com/content/3/1/21}}</ref>
PMID16816217: Case Reports; this looks like a primary study case report, can't see the body of the article, can you just verify you're only using the background section as a review?
<ref name="Baron_2011">{{Cite journal | last1 = Baron | first1 = DA. | last2 = Pato | first2 = MT. | last3 = Cyr | first3 = RL. | title = Treatment of adults with attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder. |journal = J Am Osteopath Assoc | volume = 111 | issue = 11 | pages = 610–4 | month = Nov | year = 2011 | doi = | PMID=22104513|}}</ref>
Redundant ref that can be eliminated: used only twice, in lead and adult section, to source the same statement on prevalence (2-5%) and both times accompanied by another ref (kooij) that gives the same number, its open and of similar quality.--Garrondo (talk) 20:48, 26 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref name="pmid21494335">{{cite journal |author=Culpepper, L, Mattingly G |title=Challenges in identifying and managing attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder in adults in the primary care setting: a review of the literature |journal=Prim Care Companion J Clin Psychiatry |volume=12 |issue=6 |pages= |year=2010 |pmid=21494335|pmc=3067998 |doi=10.4088/PCC.10r00951pur |url=}}</ref>
PMID20963192: ?; I bet the sentences this source is used to support are the reasons why you wrote this article
<ref name=Ant2008>{{cite journal |author=Antshel, KM |title=Attention-Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder in the context of a high intellectual quotient/giftedness |journal=Dev Disabil Res Rev |volume=14 |issue=4 |pages=293–9 |year=2008 |pmid=19072757|doi=10.1002/ddrr.34 }}</ref>
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PMID19072757: Review; use Ok after some tweaking (by me) of content to follow more closely source.--Garrondo (talk) 10:15, 26 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
<ref name="pmid21977044">{{cite journal |author=Vaivre-Douret L |title=Developmental and cognitive characteristics of "high-level potentialities" (highly gifted) children |journal=Int J Pediatr |volume=2011 |issue= |pages=420297 |year=2011 |pmid=21977044|pmc=3184407 |doi=10.1155/2011/420297 |url=}}</ref>
While pubmed considers it a study, when reading it it seems closer to a review; However, it is a review on high functioning children, and not specifically ADHD. Moreover it only has a 3 paragraphs in the whole article in connection with learning disabilities, and only one from those (the one cited) on ADHD, consisting in a citation from a primary source. I copy here all the text from the article on ADHD:
In a recent study, Loureiro et al. have shown that highly gifted children with ADHD have a particular neuropsychological profile with an important difference (at least 20 points) between verbal IQ and performance IQ at Wechsler Intelligence Scale for Children (WISC III) when compared to highly gifted children without ADHD.
Comment on ADHD in the article is so tangential that the source cannot be considered a reliable secondary source. --Garrondo (talk) 07:29, 26 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
The fact that the reference focuses on a narrow subject (cognitive and developmental issues in high intelligent children) makes it a higher quality source. We want focused sources rather than sources that skim over lots of bits of information. It would of course be better if more time was given to ADHD in this article but there is not a huge amount of research in high intelligence ADHD children. This large gap occurs in autism spectrum disorder and could contribute to a misdiagnosis of autism spectrum disorder in a high IQ ADHD child - how does it benefit our readers to remove this content from this article? I think that it is a disservice to our readers to remove this content from the article as it is an important finding in high IQ ADHD youth. Thoughts?--MrADHD | T@1k? 23:41, 27 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I copy discussion to talk, so as not to clutter review.--Garrondo (talk) 06:42, 28 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
General
Normalize references to U.S. / US / USA / United States, make all references same, probably "United States"
Following sources are used only in lead and not in body. Generally the article lead should not have sources or content that aren't covered in the body:
Bray 2011, National Institute of Neurological Disorders and Stroke, CDC "ADHD Diagnosis", A.D.A.M, Nair 2006, Rader 2009, Van Cleave 2008, others...
For a specific example, look at the epidemiology information, it's sourced in the lead but unsourced in the body. It really should be the other way around.
Y Fixed now
According to the Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders (DSM-IV-TR), symptoms emerge before seven years of age. - are there other noteworthy "official" diagnoses other than the DSM? If not, this sort of attribution is probably not necessary. To more closely reflect the source, consider "A diagnosis requires that significant symptoms appear before age 7."
Y Fixed now
and is diagnosed in about 2 to 16 percent of school-aged children. - does this need to be localized to the USA?
X Not addressed yet; the journal article used cites uptodate.com, I don't have access, can you please ask Doc James to check out whether uptodate.com localizes this figure of "2 to 16 percent" to the USA or not? I've often seen that the writing in country-specific journals (this one's named "American Family Physician") assume the scope of their country and not a global scope.
I went ahead and put this question to Doc on his User Talk page. Zad68 15:41, 31 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Answer is: The article content stating 2 to 16 percent should be qualified as in the USA.
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There are three subtypes of the disorder which consist of it being predominantly inattentive (ADHD-PI or ADHD-I), predominantly hyperactive-impulsive (ADHD-HI or ADHD-H), or the two combined (ADHD-C), which shows all three difficulties. - consider: There are three subtypes of the disorder: predominantly inattentive (ADHD-PI or ADHD-I), predominantly hyperactive-impulsive (ADHD-HI or ADHD-H), or the two combined (ADHD-C), which shows all three difficulties.
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ADHD impacts school-aged children - the use of impacts as a verb isn't standard English usage, consider "ADHD affects school-aged children"
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Signs and symptoms
Predominantly inattentive type symptoms as listed by the U.S. National Institute of Mental Health may include:[21] - agreement problem with the following bullet items, which are all introduced with present-tense verbs; consider changing to "According to the U.S. National Institute of Mental Health, an individual with inattentive-type symptoms may:"
Doc James made a change in this area but the issue is still there
Y fixed now
Same sort of fix needs to be done for Predominantly hyperactive-impulsive type symptoms may include and and also these manifestations primarily of impulsivity
Doc James made a change in this area but the issue is still there
Y fixed now
The article is quoting big chunks of the NIMH document. I think that's actually OK as it's the public domain product of the US Gov't, but I put in a question to Moonriddengirl to make sure it's OK.
Y Got the answer from Moonriddengirl, it's OK to quote extensively from the NIMH document as it's public domain Zad68 15:25, 1 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Associated disorders
Oppositional defiant disorder and conduct disorder, which occur with ADHD at a rate of 50 percent and 20 percent respectively, - should say 'approximately'
Y Fixed now
Inattention and hyperactive behavior are not necessarily the only problems in children with ADHD. ADHD exists alone in only about 1/3 of the children diagnosed with it.[citation needed] The combination of ADHD with other conditions can greatly complicate diagnosis and treatment. Many co-existing (comorbid) conditions require other courses of treatment and should be diagnosed separately instead of being grouped in the ADHD diagnosis.[citation needed] - need sources
Y Fixed now
Anxiety disorders, have been found to occur more commonly in the ADHD population. - comma unneeded
serious substance misuse problems should be treated first due to the serious risks and impairments that occur,[10]:p.38[32] with long-term alcohol misuse and long-term cannabis misuse and other drug misuse. - needs to be reworded per WP:MEDMOS to avoid sounding prescriptive (the part stating "X should be treated first"), reword to something like "those treated for X first have better outcomes or prognosis"
Y Fixed now
Restless legs syndrome, is associated with ADHD and is often due to iron deficiency anaemia. - consider "Restless legs syndrome. This is associated with ADHD and is often due to iron deficiency anaemia."
Y Acceptable now
Sleep disorders such as obstructive sleep apnea syndrome, can cause neurocognitive and behavioural symptoms - needs same fix as restless legs
Y Acceptable now
Anxiety and depression are some of the disorders that can accompany ADHD. Academic studies, and research in private practice suggest that depression in ADHD appears to be increasingly prevalent in children as they get older, with a higher rate of increase in girls than in boys, and to vary in prevalence with the subtype of ADHD. - unsourced
Y Fixed now, was duplicate, removed
Cause
Genetics
Hyperactivity also seems to be primarily a genetic condition; however, other causes have been identified.[46] - Sourced to Barkley's on-line course. On further reflection, this on-line course does not really meet WP:MEDRS and so a better source needs to be found. Can this be sourced to PMID22105624?
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Executive function
however, "EF weaknesses are neither necessary nor sufficient to cause all cases of ADHD".[50] - need to mention who you're quoting here, like as Willcutt et al. explain, "EF weaknesses are neither necessary nor sufficient to cause all cases of ADHD".[50]
Both Willcutt 2005 and Nass 2005 are really insufficient sources here per WP:MEDDATE, especially as there are plenty of more up-to-date sources that cover the same thing, and as the sources themselves say that the investigation of EF related to ADHD has been an area of active research we really need to use more up-to-date sourcing. The full text of Brown 2008 can be found here, would you please remove Willcutt 2005 and Nass 2005 and redo the EF content as necessary using Brown 2008 and other more up-to-date sourcing. Also why not insert that URL in the Brown 2008 ref.
Y fixed now
Evolution
At more than 1 percent of the population, researchers have proposed - this says that researchers make up more than 1 percent of the population, consider "Researchers have proposed that the high prevalence of ADHD - more than 1 percent of the population - may be due..."
Y fixed now
The entire Evolution section really isn't a "Cause" by itself per se but provides the background for the genetics. Consider moving this section in with Genetics
Y This suggestion was declined but still OK for GA
Consistent with this, another group of researchers observed that the health status of nomadic Ariaal men was higher if they had the ADHD associated genetic variant (7R alleles). However in recently sedentary (non-nomadic) Ariaal those with 7R alleles seemed to have slightly worse health.[58] - this is all based on an orphaned primary source, can you provide a secondary source to show that WP:DUEWEIGHT is satisfied?
Y fixed, now sourced to acceptable secondary source (book by Kiaris)
Environmental
Section name "Environmental" should be renamed "Environment" for consistency
Y fixed now
Exposure to tobacco smoke during pregnancy impairs normal development of the feotus including the central nervous system and can increase the risk of the child being diagnosed with ADHD - needs commas
Y fixed now
Children exposed to lead, even relatively low levels of lead - consider "Children exposed to even relatively low levels of lead"
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however, the evidence is not definitive as 5 of 17 studies failed to find an association.[65] - generally, avoid talking about the underlying studies, just summarize the quality of the evidence
Y fixed now
Diet: Weiss and food colorings - I'm concerned undue weight is being given to his views. I took a quick look at his literature and citations and he seems to have a minority view. Are there no other diet factors being studied besides food colorings? What about sugar and fats?
Why? :-O It is not really his views per se - he is just reviewing the literature and summarizing the history of this issue. Sugar and fats are not associated with ADHD from my understanding. Although I believe there is some evidence for omega 3 fatty acids. I have added some more content regarding omega 3 fatty acids to the medication section. :-)--MrADHD | T@1k? 21:49, 9 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Y ok
Social
Rename subsection as "Relationships" or something like it, needs to be a noun to match the other subsections
Y suggestion was declined but it's acceptable
Other researchers believe that relationships with caregivers have a profound effect on attentional and self-regulatory abilities. A study of foster children found that a high number of them had symptoms closely resembling ADHD.[73] - sourcing is insufficient, it's primary, from 2002, I can't find any relevant specialized academic credentials for the lead author Finkelstein, and the paper is the non-peer-reviewed product of an advocacy organization. This content needs to be removed or attributed to a better source.
Y fixed now as removed
Diagnosis
ADHD is diagnosed three to four times more commonly in boys than in girls - consider "more often"
Y reworded now
Factors other than those within the DSM or ICD, however, have been found to affect the diagnosis in clinical practice. For example, a study found that the youngest children in a class are much more likely to be diagnosed as having ADHD compared to their older counterparts in the same year. This is because these children may behave more hyperactively, not because they have ADHD, but because they are younger and developmentally behind their classmates. It is estimated that about 20 percent of children given a diagnosis of ADHD are misdiagnosed because of the month they were born.[85] - a lot of emphasis is being given here to an individual primary study, it seems WP:UNDUE, please trim back or find secondary source to support.
Y trimmed back
The previously-used term ADD expired with the most recent revision of the DSM - which is the most recent version referred to here, IV or V? Which was the last one ADD was used in?
Y reworded/fixed now
Classification
OK
DSM-IV
DSM-V was just released, would it be possible for you to add that?
Y Fixed now
ICD-10
OK
Other guidelines
Additionally other neurodevelopmental disorders), as well as tics - extra parenthesis?
Y fixed now
Can the AACAP's guidelines be done as prose instead of a bullet list per WP:USEPROSE?
Y suggestion declined but acceptable for GA
Differential
Symptoms of ADHD such as low mood and poor self-image, mood swings, and irritability can be confused with dysthymia, cyclothymia or bipolar disorder as well as with borderline personality disorder,[1] - should prob. end with period not comma
Y fixed now
Management
ok
Psychosocial
It is recommended first line in - the recommended first line treatment?
Y fixed now (had to add back the start of the sentence that went missing)
and outdoor activities.[102] - this is the only treatment listed here that is sourced to a primary source, and it's out of date. Are there up-to-date secondary sources that cover outdoor/"green" treatment?
Y fixed now as removed
Medication
Y - this is one of the more well-done sections
Prognosis
Smucker 2001, WP:MEDDATE problem, is still being used alongside newer source, can this source be removed?
Y fixed now as removed
In the United States, 37 percent of those with ADHD do not get a high school diploma even though many of them will receive special education services.[46] - Sourced to Barkley, which isn't sufficient. Can you find the underlying source Barkley uses to source this statement? Otherwise the statement can probably just be removed
Y fixed now as removed
Epidemiology
or that females with ADHD are less likely to be diagnosed than males - why?
Y fixed now, explanation provided
History
a little thin, but acceptable for GA
Y I see some more content added, good
Amphetamines (Benzedrine) was the first medication approved for use in the United States with methyphenidate introduced in the 1950s and dextroamphetamine (Dexadrine) in the 1970s. - a few errors here, consider "In the 1930s, the amphetamine mixture Benzedrine was the first medication approved for use in the United States. Methylphenidate was introduced in the 1950s, and dextroamphetamine (Dexadrine) in the 1970s."
Y as amended
Society and culture
A number of notable individuals have given controversial opinions on ADHD. Scientologist Tom Cruise has referred to the ADHD medications Ritalin and Adderall as being "street drugs" - this viewpoint (as well as his other viewpoints on psychiatry) has received criticism - for example the doses of stimulants used in the treatment of ADHD do not cause behavioural addiction and there is some evidence of a reduced risk of later substance addiction in children who had their ADHD treated with stimulants.[133] - please break up run-on sentence, and as the response is also published as an opinion it needs to be attributed to the author Neill
X almost there - the response still needs to be attributed in-line to Neill
Y fixed now
Scientologist, Baroness ... a leading neuroscientist - should remove these qualifiers, they are editorializing, if readers want backgrounds on these individuals they can click on the Wikilinks
Y fixed now
In England Baroness Susan Greenfield, a leading neuroscientist, spoke out publicly in 2007 in the House of Lords about the need for a wide-ranging inquiry into the dramatic increase in the diagnosis of ADHD in the UK and possible causes following a BBC Panorama programme that highlighted US research (The Multimodal Treatment Study of Children with ADHD by the University of Buffalo) suggesting drugs are no better than other forms of therapy for ADHD in the long term.[134] - please break up run-on sentence
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Controversies
With a "wide variation in diagnosis across states, races, and ethnicities" some investigators suspect that factors other than neurological conditions play a role when the diagnosis of ADHD is made.[85] - if you have a quote like this you have to attribute it in the content, state who is saying it
This is not a direct quote and should not have been placed in quotations so I just deleted the quotations. :-)--MrADHD | T@1k? 11:28, 13 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Special populations
Adults
Some ADHD symptoms in adults differ from those seen in children — for example whereas children with ADHD may climb and run about excessively, adults may experience an inability to relax and talk excessively in social situations. - consider "Some ADHD symptoms in adults differ from those seen in children. For example, while children with ADHD may climb and run about excessively, adults may experience an inability to relax, and talk excessively in social situations."
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Adults with ADHD may start relationships impulsively and may display sensation seeking behaviour and be short-tempered. - consider "Adults with ADHD may start relationships impulsively, display sensation-seeking behaviour, and be short-tempered."
Y fixed now
High IQ children
When compared with children without ADHD evidence supports - consider: "When children with ADHD are compared to compared without, evidence supports..."
Not sure that your proposed sentence makes sense?--MrADHD | T@1k? 11:47, 13 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
X The problem is that the current sentence construction is not saying what the children without ADHD are being compared to. Let's simplify the whole thing, how about: "Children with ADHD are more likely to repeat grades and have more social and functional impairments." ?
Y fixed now
Additionally, more than half of high IQ ADHD people - consider: "Additionally, more than half of people with high IQ and ADHD..."
In this section if you're talking about "high IQ" as a descriptor phrase I think it needs a hyphen, "high-IQ"
Y acceptable as-is
References
OK format, no major errors
Further reading
Consider replacing the quite old books from 2003, maybe even the 2005 one, with something more up-to-date
Y I read the archived Talk page discussion on this and now understand why it needs not to be used. Zad68 02:27, 30 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
The image File:Adhd-facts1.jpg actually does not appear to be properly licensed, regardless of what the file says. It appears to be a copyrighted image without WP-compatible licensing, see here. It needs to come out and the image file needs to be nominated for deletion. Zad68 02:27, 30 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Y fixed by Doc James. Zad68 14:38, 30 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
s. 
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