User talk:Tyepel/sandbox

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I know that you've written this article from scratch and I think you've done a really good job! I like how you briefly talked about the history of the Canucks Autism Network. I also liked how you talked about the different programs that they offer, are those the only ones? The only suggestion I could make is that the article seems to end kind of abruptly so it would be nice if you could include something about how the organization has evolved/ grown over the years.

Emmamde (talk) 02:26, 21 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Awesome job.Great work providing a clear summary of what CAN has to offer. I like how you added external links for the application process. Perhaps you could expand on each program you mentioned. Jesssicagarnett (talk) 22:48, 5 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]


Good content on the Network! I have a few suggestions for aesthetics: I would change the bold subheaders to headers (underlined and bold), and if possible some visuals would liven up the page (fair use, be sure of no copyrights). Overall, great job. Carolynweekes (talk) 23:18, 13 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]