User talk:Terrillja/Archives/07/2011

Regarding "Dubai American Academy" edits

Hi Terrillja, please check the Discussion page before "undo"ing my undoing of your edit for the "Dubai American Academy" article. Again I apologize I had to do it, but for the integrity of the article I had to undo your edit. However, I tried to make an initiative by starting to edit the parts I thought needed touch (in no ways was it exhaustively completed) but I think its a start in the right path, and follows along the lines of your ultimate aim, which is to filter the nonsense to keep the important information for the article.

Hence, when wanting to edit the page, please take into consideration the content rather than the initially intimidating copious size of the article. As I know you have written well written articles for another School in the states (high quality one), please use that same sense of professionalism and intuitiveness to bring quality to the "Dubai American Academy" article as well. I really don't think that if it is regarding the subject of irrelevancy ALL the current topics are irrelevant. I think one could find a couple of relevant information (such as the types of clubs and student lifestyle, culture, etc.) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 217.170.250.193 (talk) 23:47, 29 June 2011 (UTC)

Wrote that a while ago, and it needs serious revision as well. This is a better example of a well written article.--Terrillja _talk 21:06, 6 July 2011 (UTC)