User talk:SuperJen999
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:36, 6 July 2018 (UTC)
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Hi! I wanted to give you a bit of quick feedback on your draft. I think that it's definitely a great idea to expand the surprisingly slim article on the Premier of Nova Scotia. My main recommendations are to look into creating a section on the history of the Premiers (ie, when and why did they start and so on) and to be careful of the word "notable" since it's a little subjective. With the first recommendation, I would say to compare it to the layout of this article. While the article itself needs a lot of work (and there are obvious differences between North American state governors and Premiers), the general layout would be the same, more or less. With the list, I do think that it would be worthwhile to mention some of the Premiers that are the most widely well known, but I wouldn't use the term notable since it's subjective to the person - what one sees as notable, another may not. Also, make sure that you have secondary sourcing for this list whenever possible. You do have secondary sourcing there, but it's always good to have a little extra.
Other than that, this looks good so far! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:01, 6 July 2018 (UTC)