User talk:Screensaver/Age of Liberty

I was supposed to comment earlier, but then I had to this, and then I had to that. I'm glad to see you back, I though you didn't like Wikipedia and had left.

I am still hoping to make something useful out of the WikiProject Sweden, just so you know. It just needs some activity.

For this article:

• I would suggest getting additional reference literature. For example, compare with Nationalencyklopedin or Nordisk familjebok.
• And you should have all reference literature in its own section. What is the main reference literature you are using anyways?
• The lead section should summarize the most important things of this period.

Fred-Chess 01:13, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

Hi! Thanks for your comments. Im not gone, im just working in a very slow pace (thats why I do this at a separate page and not in the article). : - ) Concerning Wikiproject Sweden, there is a good and working groundstructure, and I do hope it will be filled with activity. Think that theres quite good hopes for that, it just takes some time for people to drop in.

When it comes from reference litterature, Im using Nationalencyklopedin (just havent printed it out jet). Dont think Nordisk familjebok is much to relie on - it is a bit old to have a "modern" view on history. Ill add the litterature Ive used so far.

Lead sections are good things. Most people (sometimes including me) only reads them. Havent really worked on it yet, planned to take that when most of the article was done, when I can see what it is that should be summarized. But I do aggree.

By the way, is there a user template (or whatever it is called) that I can put on my userpage to brag about beeing a part of the project?

Thanks for your comments! --Screensaver 18:24, 7 January 2007 (UTC)

Theres one book missing in the reference list, Ive lost it somewhere... Ill add it when I find if... : - ) Ill use more litterature later, with more specific topics. --Screensaver 18:35, 7 January 2007 (UTC)

Remember that the more detailed you are with your references, the easier it will be for you to look it up again later. That's why I prefer to add lots of references, almost to every paragraph, with page numbers (of course, I'm not saying you have to do that too).

But other that that, I just want to encourage you to keep on adding material.

Fred-Chess 21:49, 14 January 2007 (UTC)