User talk:Roxrule/Pre-Columbian Burial Mounds Of Costa Rica

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Hi Blair. I think you've got a nice entry started here. However, my main comment is that I think it would benefit from having some discussion of specific examples at particular archaeological sites in each of the regions that you mention. (I would also remove Stone's list of regions, instead including links to them within each of the corresponding sections.) There is nothing like specific examples to help a reader to picture the phenomena that you're describing. --Hoopes (talk) 23:10, 27 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I also think that, given the range of different burial types you describe, the title of this entry should actually be "Pre-Columbian Mortuary Patterns in Costa Rica." --Hoopes (talk) 23:14, 27 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]