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Critique an article

My article is one about String Cheese. One of the things that was confusing about this article is that under the Central Europe section, it does not specifically reference that the korbáčiky cheese is a type of a string cheese. Additionally, perhaps pictures would be helpful in seeing these different variations of string cheese. Furthermore, it would be helpful to add in the name of the Armenian cheese as well as a reference link to that article if it exists.

Later on, in the section titled "Western Europe" it seems as though half of that section is about a string cheese character called Mr. Strings. This does not really belong in the article, as it is only slightly related to actual Western European string cheese.

All in all, the article appears to be neutral, with no words that indicate feelings one way or another. The sources seem to be fine, but not spectacular as the Huffington Post is cited (a not traditionally great source of info) as well as some independently owned smaller websites. Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? Check a few citations. Do the links work? Is there any close paraphrasing or plagiarism in the article? Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added?

Choose at least 2 questions relevant to the article you're evaluating. 
Pollyspurple (talk) 03:47, 25 February 2017 (UTC)