User talk:Patel4ah
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:26, 2 October 2018 (UTC)
Peer Review
Hey Akash, I think your article is looking good! I think you fixed a lot of the grammar up nicely and seemed to add some helpful information! I'd love to see if you could clean up the article's order of events. There's a few pieces of information that either don't have an effective citation or none at all. It would be nice to see you add those in, if you can find them. Also if there's more information about Steve-O's treatment, I think that would be awesome to add being that his sobriety was a major part of the article. There was only the mention of treatment, but there wasn't a description of the process or where he went. I think your article looks great! Ciao, Parsonrl (talk) 18:16, 29 October 2018 (UTC)Parsonrl
November 2018
Hello, I'm Leschnei. I wanted to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions to Log have been undone because they did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you have any questions, you can ask for assistance at the Help Desk. Thanks. Leschnei (talk) 21:17, 2 November 2018 (UTC)