User talk:Mysthyria

November 2010

Welcome to Wikipedia. Everyone is welcome to contribute to the encyclopedia, but when you add or change content, as you did to the article American Pit Bull Terrier, please cite a reliable source for the content of your edit. This helps maintain our policy of verifiability. Take a look at Wikipedia:Citing sources for information about how to cite sources and the welcome page to learn more about contributing to this encyclopedia. Thank you. — HelloAnnyong ^{(say whaaat?!)} 14:20, 17 November 2010 (UTC)

I did check the source

For the expansion of the apperance, I just tacked on for the faults. Too many breeders now have these animals that do not fit breed standard. The source can be traced to the same page from ukc. For the health of the animal I added a common fault with dogs presenting the color blue. The link takes you to a page where it is discussed. What do I need to do as far as the picture? She is a papered American Pitbull Terrier, do I need to provide a registration number on her handle? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mysthyria (talk • contribs) 14:29, November 17, 2010

First off, this isn't the place to use your APBT as the archetype for all of them. Next, the reason I tagged it is mostly because of this edit. Aside from being poorly written, it's not clear what you're trying to say. Are you saying that, according to the official breed description of the dog, that those things are faults? You didn't reference anything there to back up or clarify any of the claims there. Also in this edit you broke the reference a whole bunch. Don't remove references; add to the ones that are there. — HelloAnnyong ^{(say whaaat?!)} 15:58, 17 November 2010 (UTC)