User talk:Maximus155/sandbox

The format for your wikipedia information looks good. Your references are cited nicely, and your sentences are concise and to the point. However, I think you need to find a way to combine your categories together. It looks like you may be doing this for now to make it easier to organize and work with the information, but you should try and start thinking of a way to make the information flow together and not have each cell type listed separately. Also, under endothelial cells you write "α1 and 𝛃4 integrin proteins." Is that box before the 4 supposed to be there? Or is there some character you tried to enter that didn't display properly on your wikipedia sandbox?MChapman5 (talk) 01:19, 18 February 2013 (UTC)

Thanks MChapman. I agree that some of the sections need to be expanded upon or combined. I noticed that the 𝛃 appeared as a box, like you said it wikipedia must not display the character that I used. Maximus155 (talk) 02:38, 18 February 2013 (UTC)

I removed the extra "in" in this sentence ->"This interaction results in increased in vascular endothelial growth factor, creating a more favorable microenvironment for cancer cells." otherwise it looks good BreCaitlin (talk) 03:33, 19 February 2013 (UTC)