User talk:Madelinepolson/sandbox

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Adding Sources

Your sources look good. Go ahead and add the citations to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:24, 13 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your citations are incomplete - they should look the same as they appear in your sandbox. Also remove the all caps from the article title. Do this by Mar. 3. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:32, 27 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

The Lead

Your lead is a good start. I'd change the word "reputable." Do you mean "large" or "influential"? I'd also delete the last sentence - it states a common truth about business anywhere.

Make the changes and add the lead to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 07:34, 23 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Good job. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:35, 27 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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