User talk:Kpatel1214/sandbox

I really like the way your article flows from one topic to the other. You also have plenty of awesome sources in the reference section of your article which definitely must have helped you write to this level of detail in the early stages of you article writing process. It's really beginning to look like a legitimate wikipedia page. Some things to work on would be adding more links/ linked pages to other articles on Wikipedia. There're a lot of words, concepts, and ideas that I don't know the definition to. Instead of explaining it and taking up space in your article, linking then to another page might help users understand your own page better. If an article isn't on wikipedia, then I guess it's okay to go into detail and explain a bit more. Another piece of advise would be probably to include more about his early life in his biography. I feel like it might be interesting to have a bit more background on how he got into his profession. Sometimes it can be difficult to find references that talk about early life, so no worries if it's not possible. Ooyenus1 (talk) 16:13, 6 April 2017 (UTC)Bunmi Oyenusi