User talk:Korn966

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ICCH224

Please complete online student training at https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students You must login and complete the three basic modules. After completion of these modules, we will be able to see that you have edited three pages: Please complete this assignment by the end of today. Special:Contributions/Korn966 at this time shows that you have not finished

  • be bold [1]
  • talk page tutorial [2]

You need to be logged in, so that your contributions are recorded under your account. --Taweetham (talk) 14:07, 29 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Special:Contributions/Korn966 at this time shows that you have finished the online student training at https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students. Thank you for completing the student training, please propose a few topics that you wish to write on Wikipedia. You should read all related articles on Wikipedia and draft your new article(s) or revision to existing article(s) in your sandbox. We are looking forward to seeing

  • Your proposed topic(s)
  • Brief outline of your contributions to the article
  • References for the article and sources of media files (photo/VDO/drawing) to be used in the article.

in your sandbox by Friday 6th October. There will be a few reminders before the deadline. Should you have any questions, please feel free to ask. --Taweetham (talk) 02:40, 30 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

This is a reminder that you have to complete your homework by Friday 6th October to continue with Wikipedia Education Program. It is best that you attempt it before the deadline and we can give you early feedback and directions. --Taweetham (talk) 00:08, 4 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your concept is approved. I agree that VDO should be added to the article for both showers and eyewash. However, your reference materials are not sufficient. You should find out more about international standards. --Taweetham (talk) 05:20, 7 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Please upload the VDO taken yesterday to Wikimedia common asap. Please use existing category, commons:category:Emergency Eye Wash Station and commons:Category:Emergency_shower. --Taweetham (talk) 06:39, 8 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

According to the timeline on course page, you are expected to contribute at least 500 bytes by the 13th October. It does not need to be perfect at this time if it is on your sandbox for new article. It has to be somewhat presentable if you are editing the existing article directly. Further optional training on the course page will help you. Feel free to ask if you have any questions. --Taweetham (talk) 09:59, 9 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank your for your draft contribution to the article.

  1. Category for your three files, File:How to use an Emergency Eye wash.ogg, File:How to use Emergency Shower.ogg and File:How to use Emergency Showerr.ogg has been changed. Next time you should be more careful to put proper category for your files. You may change the name of the files later.
    • We can improve the quality of the three VDOs further. Remove the sound. Put background sign and adjust zoom/focus to the part that you want to demonstrate. You can upload a newer version of the file to the same name. Do not upload to a new name.
    • Please add these files to the article. It may replace existing photos.
  2. Please work on the text and references. You may edit the article directly.

We expect to see your work in the article namespace by Friday the 20th of October. --Taweetham (talk) 02:46, 14 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

A reviewer has been assigned to you. Please check course page for more information. The reviewer will be your mentor for this assignment from this week onward. --Taweetham (talk) 01:38, 15 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank your for your contribution to the article. There are a number of possible improvements:

  1. You have not addressed media/text suggestion made earlier. Please format your references and other references in the article properly e.g. use {{citeweb}} when appropriate.
  2. Please read article discussion page and try to address issues discussed there.
  3. Please read general information on the course page to make sure that you satisfy all aspects of our grading criteria.

--Taweetham (talk) 03:58, 21 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Please fix the reference in the article. --Taweetham (talk) 08:26, 6 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hi User:Korn966! Thank you for your participation in the education program. Here are your final feedbacks.

  • Please make sure that there is no space after dot before you put a citation. ".[1]" not". [1]"
  • References items 5&6, 8&9 are duplicates.
  • Please make sure that there's no grammatical error especially under == Specification and requirement == and == Location ==

Good luck! --Athikhun.suw (talk) 03:23, 11 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]