User talk:Kopana
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TheRingess 04:34, 8 January 2006 (UTC)
I took a look at this page and I created a gameplay section and added the spoiler template (I'm not sure that was necessary but in case the article gives away important details it needs it).
The article probably won't get deleted if it is a notable enough game and has enough players, it won't get deleted for a lack of formatting.
I have a few minor suggestions.
- Consider rewriting the sentence "It was designed by a small group of people..." to specify who this group of people are and remove the passive voice so in other words Insert group here designed the game.... also specify when they designed it, where and provide a source. Since you don't specify the group, it's impossible to verify certain details about their motives, which may lead to a fellow editor deleting at least those lines.
- Consider creating subsections for the gameplay section. This will have the benefit of making the article easier to read.
I don't have any other suggestions, congrats on the article.
TheRingess 05:01, 8 January 2006 (UTC)
Hi. Didn't mean to cause offence. It's the style in which your "Blade Mistress" article is written that made me think it was more akin to an advertisement than an encyclopedia article - e.g. very informal use of language, perhaps overly enthusiastic. Am happy to remove template and, instead, suggest general cleanup is appropriate. LeContexte 08:31, 12 January 2006 (UTC)
Fractals
I'm glad you liked my fractal gallery. TheRingess 04:31, 11 January 2006 (UTC)