User talk:Kaydeeay/sandbox

Hi Kaydeeay

   Your Sandbox looks very organized and the sections are very clear. I do think that in your Demographics section there is room to add details about the parks you listed, adding these details will call more of the readers attention to want to visit the areas. I think with the restaurant section the location of each should be added to give the readers direction. I really like the detail that you put in your Schools section about South Boston Catholic academy. Your sandbox looks great ! (AlyssaMDejesus)

Hi Kaydeeay

I think your Wikipedia page looks very organized were you can go through it and learn what all the sections have in them. I do recommend that you do add more detail to the different section in your wikipedia page. there is a lot of just information but i have to idea what it all means. I only see that you add detail to the some of the section and the other seconds do not have any details in them. I would also recommend that you add the policy section to your wikipedia page. that is one of the section in which the professor is going to grade us on after we finish the whole page. But over all i thought it was a great page and just add those little things will help the page look much better.

(173.244.10.20 (talk)). —Preceding undated comment added 19:25, 11 April 2016 (UTC)

So you have the list of information, great. They can guide you for writing your section entries. Now you need detailed encyclopedia entries. You have several examples from the Brooklyn Wiki page, to other boston neighborhood wiki pages. Dr. Chenault Tiffygc1 (talk) 19:58, 15 April 2016 (UTC)