User talk:Kalras
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:31, 18 September 2018 (UTC)
Kalras Peer Review
This article does a good job of describing what the architecture looks like. Talking about the stained glass, flying buttresses, and ribbed vaults really provides the reader a sense of what it actually looks like and the grandeur the building has been given by its gothic details. Your article seems to be balanced in what's discussed and very neutral. The sources used do come up in a search engine, which is great. I did notice some grammer issues, however we're only human. I also would like to see some more in-text citing between the article and your listed references. Right now there is only one about the Marcade Collection. Overall, your article is well-planned and presented, and I really enjoyed the seperate sections that guided the discussion (I think my article needs more of that...). Good job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rachelmantel (talk • contribs) 23:21, 10 December 2018 (UTC)