User talk:Junior213
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Hello. Do you have any connection with Amir Kassaei? Cheers, 1292simon (talk) 02:25, 22 August 2020 (UTC)
- Hi 1292simon, no, I don't! I was going to write on your talk page with a few questions as well. Will get back to you there! --Junior213 (talk) 13:01, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks Junior213, that's great to hear. Cheers, 1292simon (talk) 08:27, 25 August 2020 (UTC)
@1292simon: I remodeled the structure of the article and added a vast amount of information on early years, private life and awards through additional web research. I think it's pretty impossible not to make this article sound like an advertisement: I mean, the guy is in advertising and he's good at it: every single source I found basically oozes superlatives without any references or neutral sources. But I was wondering if you'd be willing to remove the aspect "doubts on general notability" from the header template? Thanks for that! Also it's possible that my english is not totally perfect – I'd be happy if someone would read the article and correct errors which might have sneaked in. --Junior213 (talk) 17:58, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
- Hi Junior213. Thanks for your work improving the article, it is in much better shape now. The only remaining concerns I have are that "He quickly transformed it into one of the most creative and successful agencies in the world" and "Kassaei is said to have received...more than 4.000 awards" sound quite promotional. If these issues are addressed, I am happy for you to remove the Advert tag. Cheers, 1292simon (talk) 22:03, 23 October 2020 (UTC)
@1292simon: done! Is numerous awards fine as I start to list them afterwards? --Junior213 (talk) 23:06, 23 October 2020 (UTC)
- Yes that's fine by me. Thanks for checking. Cheers, 1292simon (talk) 23:08, 23 October 2020 (UTC)
@1292simon: Would you remove the label "advertisement"? I don't think I should do that myself. Junior213 (talk) 10:49, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
- Sure, I've now removed the tag. Cheers, 1292simon (talk) 21:08, 27 October 2020 (UTC)