User talk:Jerahr

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Welcome!

Hello, Jerahr, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:57, 15 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Issue Ownership moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, Issue Ownership, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Also, while there is a list of references, there are no footnotes. Please see WP:CIT on how to format citations, and what information needs to be included. Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Onel5969 TT me 10:34, 17 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

As far as citations go, I see you have some at the end of your draft, but you have no inline citations. Every statement should be followed by a supporting citation; if a group of sentences are all supported by the same source, you can place a single reference after all of them, but you need to have at least one reference per paragraph, and you shouldn't have any statements after the final reference in a paragraph. If you need a refresher on how to add citations, please consult this training module.
There are also some issues with the overall organisation of the article. A Wikipedia article is supposed to start with a lead section that summarizes all the major points of the article. It should generally open with something like Article title is... and go on to succinctly say what the topic is in the opening sentence.
The remainder of the lead needs to summarize all the major points of the article, in proportion to the way they're covered in the body of the article. Nothing should be in the lead that's not discussed in more depth in the article body.
I've lined to the Editing Wikipedia brochure. You should have a look at pages 7-9 for some more information on general article layout. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:26, 17 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Issue Ownership

Information icon Hello, Jerahr. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Issue Ownership, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 16:05, 2 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]