User talk:Gbrister

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Hello, Gbrister, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:52, 19 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Guilelessness in Autism

I moved your draft back to your sandbox, because it isn't ready for mainspace

  • Wikipedia articles need to have a lead section that summarizes the main points of the article, in relation to how they are covered in the article body.
  • Avoid things like {{tq|Guilelessness is a noun that by definition is a state of earnestness or simplicity}] - that's what you might write in the lead of an article about Guilelessness, if one existed (though it would be better to focus on what the concept itself is, not what the word is)
  • You need sources that address this concept explicitly. Right now you only have one scholarly source (the Jaarsma et al. 2012 one) and it doesn't appear to address the concept explicitly (it doesn't seem to use the word "guile" or "guilelessness"). So you need better sources. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:56, 7 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]