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The Breakfast Club

1. 4: This article was started all the way back in March of 2001. In the beginning phases it was simply the back cover's summary of the story along with production information. The second editor along with many editors afterward filled out the plot and additional character information. That material was added only weeks later. Towards the beginning there were more opinions but as editors came along much of the opinion disappeared. Yes the page is still active, having edits made as early as March 31st.

1. 5: The talk page is heavily used in this article. There are 32 different sub sections talking about either unconfirmed theories, hints towards other shows, theatrical presentation, and even a section for proper talk page etiquette. It seems like lots of different people talk, though a few names popped up more than once. The conversation is great and typically calm. They just want to discuss things that they love about the movie and really dig deep into all of the hidden or implied content.

Strengths: Lots of information in the opening section that give a good overview of the movie as well as its success. Production is succinct and gives information not generally known about the movie. They have legacies showing what the movie had influenced and a critical response. Lots of citation to back up plot information as well. Weaknesses: The entire plot of the film seems to be revealed and leaves nothing to those who haven't seen it. Critical review seems lacking, especially considering it's from Rotten Tomatoes. Lack of performer biographical information, but it is linked to other Wiki pages.

My edits: Simple grammar checks in the opening sections