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Wheelchair Basketball. [Electronic Resource]. n.p.: CapStone Press, n.d. Louisiana State University. Web. 25 Oct. 2015.

Fontaine, Pamela J. Wheelchair Basketball. [Microform] : An Analysis Of The Factors Leading To Team Success. n.p.: 1994., 1994. Louisiana State University. Web. 25 Oct. 2015.

Szyman, Robert J., et al. "Ball Size And Distance As Constraints In Prep Wheelchair Basketball Free Throws." Palaestra 28.3 (2014): 22-25 4p. CINAHL Complete. Web. 25 Oct. 2015.

"Effects Of Modified Multistage Field Test On Performance And Physiological Responses In Wheelchair Basketball Players." Biomed Research International 2015.(2015): 1-7 7p. CINAHL Complete. Web. 25 Oct. 2015. Vancouver/ICMJE

Link to article- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wheelchair_basketball

Your sources look good, but you should post them in the sandbox, not the talk page. Josef Horáček (talk) 17:54, 26 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The Lead

I don't see your draft. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:22, 1 November 2015 (UTC) Samsung Galaxy E7. The Samsung Galaxy E7 is an Android smartphone produced by Samsung Electronics. The Samsung Galaxy E7 is powered by the 64bit capable Snapdragon 410 chipset that houses 4 Cortex A53 cores clocked at 1.2 Ghz each coupled with an Adreno 306 GPU and 2GB RAM. There's 16GB of internal storage available and it also has a micro sd slot for memory expansion.The design aesthetic of the E7 is unmistakably Samsung - a mix of the Galaxy A7 and the Galaxy S flagships before the Galaxy S6 came along. The Galaxy E7 also has an improved battery life and has a durable build so a case is not even necessary. The phone has 720p resolution as well as many user friendly capabilities. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Curtiswarren49x (talk • contribs) 17:09, 2 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

You should specify when the phone was released. Also, be careful that the language is purely descriptive rather than evaluative. It shouldn't read like a review or an advertisement. The biggest issue here is the last phrase, "many user friendly capabilities." You should delete it or change it. Once you make these changes, you can post the lead. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:56, 8 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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