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I thought the article was well-researched and clearly organized. You might want to think about including a few more links to existing articles (eg: /Musical_film, /Comedy, /João_Goulart). I'd like another opinion on how you structured your References and Bibliography sections. My concern is that while it's thorough, it might not be ideal for this format. Let me ask our online ambassador for guidance regarding the structure. Ycl4 (talk) 21:22, 27 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I thought your, “Background,” section did a good job of providing cultural and political context of how the Cinema Novo movement began. The “Influences,” section could benefit from some popular examples. The “Ideology,” section contains information that overlaps with the “Background,” section so you might want to think about condensing some things. It would be helpful to have some images in your, “Theme and Style,” section. I like that you examine Cinema Novo in three phases then lead to the “End of Cinema Novo,” section – it provides a complete picture and an easy to follow timeline.