User talk:AverageStudent23/sandbox

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For the topic sentence: "Allison Odgen-Newton (born 27 June 1963) is a British charity professional and social entrepreneur." Divide the sentence there. In the next sentence, "She has worked ...". After that, terms like "breakthrough" are not compatible with Wikipedia's style. It is better to have an independent reference that says what the Transition Institute is aiming to do: for example use https://www.wbs.ac.uk/news/change-maker-ogden-newton-s-fight-for-justice/.

Generally, this is a suitable topic for a Wikipedia article, but the referencing must be done carefully, and phrases copied directly from websites will cause copyright problems. There seem to be numerous potential references in Google News.

Ogden-Newton has an entry in Who's Who online, which gives basic biographical facts. Charles Matthews (talk) 08:09, 26 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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