User talk:AlexisElena/sandbox
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Lead and Layout
The layout of the article is solid, however the Significance of the drought could be touched upon more in the Lead. The citations were good, especially since it showed the authority of the authors of the sources. The quotes were consistent as well.0 Jarosas2 (talk) 21:31, 18 November 2016 (UTC)
Economic Effects
Can this be shown in greater detail? This coincides with Effects as well but it is marked differently. The significance of it could be played upon more with more details as to why the costs are important and what it has done to the people of California. This could also be further developed since droughts. not only affect the envioent but people as well. Jarosas2 (talk) 21:35, 18 November 2016 (UTC)