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Koltonwhitmire (talk) 16:45, 4 May 2017 (UTC)Koltonwhitmire Some brief suggestions on your outline:

Great information, decisively neutral tone, mostly encyclopedic, concise, no fluff. The definition of domestic terrorism focuses a little to heavily on the vantage point of the U.S. The directly worded definition of how the U.S. regards domestic terrorism is a nice touch, but you may consider looking at how other nations define it as well. Could you cite where you were given the information that the term "homegrown terrorism" originated from jihadi violence against the West? You may be quoting a little too heavily, it may be easier if you summarize to avoid any copyright issues. At the end of section 2.1 "Lone Wolf" Terrorism, you could add a small section referencing Timothy McVeigh in relation to white separatist groups and anti-government sentiment, just watched a documentary over that. Consider editing "anarchy was a huge thing". Section 2.1 "Lone Wolf", is there a citation for lone wolf attacks being the most prevalent form of domestic terror?