User talk:Abigaicatherine
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Ethical Living Review:
Great lead paragraph, it presents ethical living in an interesting and simplistic way.
I recommend describe how ethical living manifests in the practices of “consumerism, sustainability, environmentalism, wildlife and animal movement” more in detail.
Consider addressing why ethical living has not evolved into an organized social movement.
The detailed discussion of what living ethically looks like in the second paragraph contributes to the overall clarity of the article. Explain how the lifestyle changes listed out in the paragraph are examples of ethical living practices. For example, what ethics or moral values are taken into consideration when making the daily decision to switch off the lights when you are not in the room?
The last paragraph lacks a smooth transition and it is not clear why Briton is relevant.
Expand on the topic of the environmental movement’s beliefs about ethical living, and the argument for the involvement of Big Business. This could be an individual body paragraph with a bolded header.
The first reference link leads to a book on ethics and feminism, from the information currently presented in the article, it does not seem as through feminism is relevant. Perhaps add a body paragraph that discusses the connection of feminism to ethical living. Fei Wade (talk) 01:00, 23 November 2017 (UTC)