User:Slatere4
My name is Emily Slater. I'm from Allen Park, Michigan, and I'm a fourth year senior at MSU studying Environmental Engineering. My interests include volleyball, tennis, bowling, art, and puppies.
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The article that I'm doing my project on is on Dissection.
Peer Review
Hello Emily!
I really enjoyed reading your draft. You did a very great job adding important information to the article! I would also like to point out your great use of language. It was very concise yet detailed and it allowed the reader to flow through your work very nicely. Also, I found the information you added very relevant to what is happening right now in the scientific world regarding the use of cadavers in dissection today.
Although I found your article to be very well articulated, a possible suggestion on my behalf is adding some more pictures so the article can show how dissection really is.
Overall, I was really impressed by your article draft! Great job!
Britogissel (talk) 04:01, 5 April 2016 (UTC)britogissel