Template:Did you know nominations/Violet Oon
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Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:17, 7 May 2019 (UTC)
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:07, 29 May 2019 (UTC)
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Violet Oon
... that Violet Oon performed a Singaporean food demonstration at the James Beard Foundation as the food ambassador of Singapore?Spencer, Brian (18 June 2013). "Singapore's Soul Food Guru". Travel + Leisure. Retrieved 29 April 2019. and "Violet Oon". Singapore Women's Hall of Fame. Retrieved 29 April 2019.
ALT1:... that Singapore's food ambassador Violet Oon owns five restaurants specializing in Peranakan and British-Hainanese cuisine?Goh, Kenneth (15 November 2018). "Singapore Chef Violet Oon Celebrates Colonial Cafe Culture With Fourth Restaurant". Retrieved 29 April 2019. and Ahmad, Nureza (2019). "Violet Oon". Singapore Infopedia. National Library Board. Retrieved 29 April 2019.- ALT2:... that although her mother never cooked, Violet Oon learned to cook Peranakan food at the age of sixteen before eventually being appointed the food ambassador of Singapore? "Violet Oon". Singapore Women's Hall of Fame. Retrieved 29 April 2019. and Ahmad, Nureza (2019). "Violet Oon". Singapore Infopedia. National Library Board. Retrieved 29 April 2019.
- Reviewed: Exempt (fewer than 3 DYKs)
Created and moved to mainspace by MarkH21 (talk). Self-nominated at 19:55, 29 April 2019 (UTC).
Claiming this nomination, it caught my attention as I just came back from vacation in Singapore. I wonder if a better hook could be proposed here: ALT0 doesn't really make much sense to those unfamiliar with this James Beard Foundation thing, and I don't think ALT1 is that spectacular as it's not really uncommon for entrepreneurs or companies to own five or more restaurants. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:28, 4 May 2019 (UTC)
@Narutolovehinata5: Good point! Added ALT2 which is much more unique and understandable than the previous suggested hooks. Is that suitable? — MarkH21 (talk) 08:15, 5 May 2019 (UTC)
- I think it's a much better hook. As such I'm striking the original two; the full review will follow today if I'm not too busy. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 21:09, 6 May 2019 (UTC)
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- Earwigs gives a 27.0% score, but it seems to be more due to repeating of nouns, so not an issue.
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Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:17, 7 May 2019 (UTC)