Template:Did you know nominations/Tom Hom
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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:44, 3 June 2018 (UTC)
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Tom Hom
- ... that Tom Hom became the second Asian American elected to the California State Legislature? Source:San Diego Union-Tribune, 2014
- ALT1:... that Tom Hom was the first non-Caucasian elected to the San Diego City Council? Source: Chinese America, History and Perspectives, p. 70
- ALT2:... that Tom Hom worked on a farm, previously owned by a Japanese American family, during World War II? Source: Los Angeles Times, 1991
- Comment: Although I made two edits to the article prior to the improvement period, I did not begin major improvement until 16 May 2018, after Tom.Reding (talk · contribs) made an edit. From 16 May 2018 until today, I expanded the article from 590 bytes (101 words) of prose to 3380 bytes (590 words) exceeding the fivefold expansion requirement (to expand to 2950 bytes of prose). The article exceeds 1,500 characters of prose. No CopyVio is intended with the highest score being 11.5%. I have yet to complete a QPQ, and will add that review upon its completion.
5x expanded by RightCowLeftCoast (talk). Self-nominated at 22:08, 19 May 2018 (UTC).
- QPQ completed with the review of this DYK for the article Baron Kilkeel.--RightCowLeftCoast (talk) 22:34, 19 May 2018 (UTC)
Article has been expanded five-fold and past the minimum character count. It is well sourced, neutral, and free of plagiarism. I would caution that the writing is a bit rough in some places, so perhaps you should ask for a copyedit. The hooks are cited inline to reliable sources; I prefer the first two hooks, as the third isn't particularly interesting to a broad audience. QPQ has been completed. SounderBruce 06:05, 30 May 2018 (UTC)
