Template:Did you know nominations/Missouri Lumber and Mining Company
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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:16, 30 January 2020 (UTC)
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Missouri Lumber and Mining Company
- ... that c. 1900, the Missouri Lumber and Mining Company provided health care to field workers with a mobile clinic transported by railroad flatcar? Source: [1] "two fully-equipped travelling units--small, two-roomed buildings that could be loaded and unloaded onto railroad flat cars--that acted as dispensary, operating room, examining room, and sleeping quarters for the travelling physicians who visited each camp three times a week."
Created by MB (talk). Self-nominated at 23:42, 10 January 2020 (UTC).
The article is new, created within the last seven days and meets the required length. It scores low on the copyvio detector. The hook is reliably sourced, but I would add "a pioneer of company-sponsored health care" after the name to be more attention-grabbing. Less Unless (talk) 16:54, 11 January 2020 (UTC)
MB - what do you think about modifying the hook? Less Unless (talk) 16:47, 12 January 2020 (UTC)
- Less Unless, I'm hesitant to do that. Being "a pioneer of company-sponsored health care" is pretty bold. It is in the source, but it could be a bit subjective and the source isn't exactly a history of health care in the U.S.; I wouldn't put that in a hook without a another source. MB 06:32, 13 January 2020 (UTC)
- MB, I see your point, I agree. Less Unless (talk) 15:28, 13 January 2020 (UTC)