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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:40, 20 December 2016 (UTC)
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Kanai Pal
... that Trotskyist state legislator Kanai Pal was jailed soon after being elected in 1962?
- Reviewed: Martin Schmeding
Created by Soman (talk). Self-nominated at 20:35, 25 November 2016 (UTC).
Date, size, neutrality, and copyvio are ok. There are two problems. First, the article does not say he was jailed after being elected. It says he was jailed multiple times (but not when), and that he was detained after said election, but detained =/= jailed. This needs to be clarified. Second, and this is not a DYK-stopping issue, but it would be really nice to see his birth and death dates in the article. PS. I'd also strongly suggest adding the word Indian to the hook. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:05, 28 November 2016 (UTC)
- Um... where? EEng 05:56, 1 December 2016 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that Indian Trotskyist state legislator Kanai Pal was jailed soon after being elected in 1962? Article is reworded now. --Soman (talk) 21:07, 2 December 2016 (UTC)
GTG now. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:46, 18 December 2016 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that Indian Trotskyist state legislator Kanai Pal was jailed soon after being elected in 1962? Article is reworded now. --Soman (talk) 21:07, 2 December 2016 (UTC)
