Talk:Why (Taeyeon song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 18:35, 30 December 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• Add release year in brackets for her EP

• I don't think that affect much the article's quality.

• with elements from tropical house → with elements of tropical house

•  Done

• number six on Billboard → number six on the Billboard

•  Done

• Two music videos for the song were released → use "track" here for alternation

• "track" is used when talking about a CD/physical release, therefore it is not applicable here

• the first video was directed by → state "the first one" here for alternation

•  Done

• and was released simultaneously with the release of the song. → and premiered simultaneously with the single's release

•  Done

• The second one which is a dance version featuring Taeyeon performing the choreography to the song → The second visual, which is a dance version featuring Taeyeon performing choreography to the song,

•  Done

Infobox

• flawless ;)

Background and release

• over 140,000 physical copies in South Korea → state "in that territory" here for alternation

•  Done

• number-one hit → number one hit

• Not applicable because "number-one" is already an adjective, while "number one" is not

• The lead single was "Starlight" → state "the lead one" here for alternation

•  Done

• single after "Starlight"; it was released → single after "Starlight", being made available (alternation)

•  Done

Music and lyrics

• "woozy" tropical house beat and likened the song's → comma before "and"

•  Done

• Release year for "Middle" in brackets

•  Done

Reception

• were enthusiastic the track's musical styles → was enthusiastic towards the track's musical styles

•  Done

• at number seven on the Gaon Digital Chart on the → at number seven on the aforementioned chart on the

•  Done

Music videos

• There are two accompanying music videos → Two accompanying music videos were shot

• Current sentence is alright I think

• was released simultaneously with the release of the single → premiered simultaneously with the single's release (alternation)

•  Done

• as the protagonist who desire → as the protagonist who desires

•  Done

• expressed: "Taeyeon shows → : to ,

• I don't get this point

• choreography to the song → choreography created for the song

•  Done

Promotion

• Subsequently following the release → comma after "Subsequently"

•  Done

• on a series of concert → on a series of concerts

•  Done

Charts

• U.S. → US

•  Done

Other stuff

Copy-violation

• 17.4% is super!

Images

• Sample seems stable ;)

Links

• 1 problem here! Please fix!!

•  Done

References

• As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertions made in this article
• No dead links! Good job!!

Outcome

•  On hold for 7 days! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:37, 31 December 2016 (UTC)

• Thank you so much! — Simon (talk) 02:47, 1 January 2017 (UTC)

You're welcome! Gladly passing! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:25, 1 January 2017 (UTC)