Talk:United States v. Sandoval

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This article is missing a lot of pertinent information. It barely touches on the cultural context of the time frame the events occurred in. It also, leaves out that it was the Santa Clara Pueblo. The author also had Sandoval's first name listed as Juan, when it was Felipe. I made and edit to fix that. It also seems to place a greater importance on bootlegging, when the case it self is more import for showing the racism and power struggles struggles that were present internally in the government amongst other issues. It appears the person who wrote this was rather careless in paying attention to detail. The article needs some major revisions or should be rewritten more thoroughly. Jackiewickens (talk) 19:05, 28 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Agreed. This article is very bad. All I could do, given time constraints, was remove the original research and pov pushing, not add everything that was needed. Savidan 20:50, 28 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]


looks good except in LINE 1 change "occurredin to occurred within, delete the comma after It also... Thanks Al Eire's Son 18:46, 6 April 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Eire's Son (talkcontribs)

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