Talk:Typhoon Francisco (2013)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Juliancolton (talk · contribs) 17:34, 16 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

It seems the merge discussion has been closed, so now that the article is stable, I'll review it.

Minor quibble here, but I think it's a bit weird that the ordinal indicators in the second sentence are in subscript. I don't know what the MoS says about this, but I've always seen them in superscript.
Might be good to figure out a way to link central dense overcast when you talk about the eye being surrounded by deep convection.
Japanese refiner company Nansei Sekiyu KK to suspend berthing operations at its facility on Okinawa. - I have no idea what that means, but I'll assume I'm just out of touch.
On Izu Ōshima, all 8,365 residents were advised to evacuate for the first time in 27 years, of whom about 1,300 people were forced to evacuate - bit of a cumbersome sentence with the dangling modifier.
Finally, I think you should add a brief description for each "see also" link, relating them to Francisco.

As I trust you'll take care of this stuff, I'll go ahead and pass the article. Nice job! – Juliancolton | ^Talk 17:34, 16 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]