Talk:Typhoon Dujuan (2003)/GA1

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)

• "Typhoon Dujuan (international designation: 0313,[1] JTWC designation: 14W,[2] PAGASA name: Onyok[3]) was the strongest tropical cyclone to strike the Pearl River delta since Typhoon Hope in 1979" link to 1979 PTS when you say "1979". YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
  • I don't think the season article link is needed when I already link to the storm. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
• "Dujuan weakened to severe tropical storm status before making landfall on September 2 in southern China," what's a "severe tropical storm"? (I know what it is, but the average American that sits and eats all day may not :P ). YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Added link. That work? --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
• ", naming it Onyok.[3]" link to List of tropical cyclone names here. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Agreed! --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
• "Radar from the Hong Kong Observatory indicated in inner eye about 20 km (12 mi) in diameter," "in" to "an". YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Err, yes. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
• "there was about NT$200 (TWD, $115 million USD)" was about $200 in what? damages? french toasts? basketballs? scooters? Also, you sure it was $200 or $200 million. Or does Twain have no inflation? :P YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Fixed. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
• "for the first time since Typhoon York 1999.[6][16] " missing an "in". And link to York 99/1999 PTS's articles. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Added. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)

In all, very good. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)

Thanks! --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)