Talk:The Sue Sylvester Shuffle/GA1

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Reviewer: Glimmer721 talk 21:25, 20 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I will be reviewing this article. Please note that this is my first GA review, and I think I've only seen one Glee episode. I may ask for a second opinion or consult a mentor.


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Pretty good article; just a few small things!
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    Good, just a few suggestions (you may comment to them if you disagree):
  • I would link "extras" (as in "over 500 extras") to extra (actor). (This is done in the Production section, but not the lead).
  • To avoide confusion in the lead, I would change the sentence in the third paragraph to "The episode received a mixed response..." because it is similar to the sentence in the 2nd paragraph about the performances.
  • In the first paragraph of the plot section, you may wish to mention that Sue Sylvester is the coach of the cheerleading squad. I'm also a bit confused as to why she would want to fire a cheerleader to make her love football more.
  • Production section: the filming of "Thriller" was delayed because of the flu, but was this before or after the tonsillitis outbreak?
  • Give Couric's first name to make it clearer.
  • Has Strado appeared in any episode after, like dos Santos hinted?
  • Critical response section: quote VanDerWerff's "boring"
  • As this is an American TV show, use the American English variant "summarize" instead of "summarise" in the Ken Tucker's EW review (this also being printed in America).
  • "also mocked Lohan's daughter Lindsay." Comma after "daughter".
  • "Canning called Couric's cameo..." Start this sentence with "However" or another transition to make it more understandable.
  • Performances section: use a {{see also}} template to link List of songs in Glee (season 2) as related.
Corrected all the minor mistakes. It should be good now. :) - DAP388 22:07, 20 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I see. I'll be passing this. Glimmer721 talk 00:36, 21 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
    Great sourcing.
  2. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  3. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  4. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
    Seems there are no edit wars from recent history.
  5. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
    I am no expert on this, but they seem okay. Unlike te templates for book covers, etc., there is no "purpose" field to explain a fair-use rationale. They seem relevent in the article.
  6. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    I'll hold until the wording issues are resolved, but it seems to be GA quality. Glimmer721 talk 21:27, 20 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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