Talk:The Leader (web series)

The Leader (web series) has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: March 26, 2021. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:The Leader (web series)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:52, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:52, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Improve the non-free use rationale for the poster with this template.
- Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The infobox itself, on the other hand, appears to be missing several parameters, such as "language" and "voices".
- Added "language" (although I didn't do it before since its quite redundant); and I don't have the information on the voice actors to include it (no sources provide as far as I can tell). Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The word "intellectual" doesn't seem neutral. Try describing who Karl Marx was instead.
- Changed for "philosopher". Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Add a serial comma after "propagandism".
- Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Plot

Again, change "intellectual" per WP:NPOV.
- Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The phrase "and leaving of" sounds off as it splits the sentence. Try rewording.
- Paraphrased. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Remove the comma after "with his death".
- Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Production

"merchandisesuch" → "merchandise such"
- Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Add a serial comma after "stage plays".
- Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think "sinonizated" is an actual word.
- True. Reworded as "went through a sinicization". Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Broadcast

"social-media" → "social media"
- Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"more-serious" → "more serious"
- Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Is there a word missing between "about political economy"?
- No. Is it sounding strange to you? The article by Engels that Marx reads is about political economy. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

A little bit, yes, but no worries as it's still readable. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:37, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"surplus value" → "surplus-value"
- Not usually hyphenated. The article surplus value writes it this way. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Add a serial comma after "boils".
- Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Add a serial comma after "Austrian, Prussian".
- Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
All summaries are under 200 words, so they pass MOS:TVPLOT.

Reception

In the text and in the reference by her, change "Millingan" to "Milligan".
- Wow, nice catch. Thanks. Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Similar issue, but change "Fanzoni" to "Fantoni"
- Thanks again. Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References

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Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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