Talk:The Incentive/GA1
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 17:31, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
- Infobox: Use {{start date}} in templates for dates
- Infobox: No guest stars?
- Infobox: Link The Office?
- Lede: Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
- Lede: Same goes for showrunner
- Lede: NBC → the National Broadcasting Company (NBC), as per MOS:ACRO
- Plot: Direct quotes need actual references
- Production: "The official website for The Office" don't think that is important to subject. Perhaps remove.
- Cultural references: Seems small. Expand, or merge with production
- Reception: "%" → "percent"
- Reviews: Seems quotey. Consider paraphrasing, etc.
- I did a little copy-edit, please check it, which had some typos
- That's all, on hold for now. Good work.
- TBrandley 03:42, 8 September 2012 (UTC)