Talk:Swaziland at the 2008 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 15:48, 1 December 2018 (UTC)

• Dlamini was chosen as the flag-bearer for the opening ceremony . There were two Dlaminis.
• seventh and last in her heat, and over nine seconds behind the heat's winner, Shericka Williams of Jamaica, and Dlamini was eliminated - rewrite to seventh and last in her heat, over nine seconds behind the heat's winner, Shericka Williams of Jamaica, and was eliminated from the competition
• and Dlamini was eliminated from the competition ---> and thus, Dlamini was eliminated from the competition.
• They did not send a team to The nation did not send a delegation
• You wrote Dlamini first and Mbisi second in the athletics section but you wrote the reverse in the table . Consider swapping the athletes in the table .
• The prose says Dlamini finished seventh in her heat but the table says eighth. Please correct them .

Comments

@Courcelles: The review is now complete. The article only needs a few fixes and it will get to GA status. Kpgjhpjm 15:48, 1 December 2018 (UTC)

• I was wondering if there can be some clarification about Dlamini's heat. In the prose, it says she finished 7th in her heat, but the table says she finished 8th. Thanks. GaryColemanFan (talk) 18:04, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
  • @GaryColemanFan: Thanks for raising this point . Looks like I missed it . Kpgjhpjm 01:29, 2 December 2018 (UTC)
    • Fixed that, this is what I deserve for not closely examining the existing tables. She was originally eighth when the tables were created back in 2008, but there was a retroactive disqualification of another competitor, and she is now officially seventh. Courcelles (talk) 20:09, 3 December 2018 (UTC)
• Thanks for the review, Kpgjhpjm, everything has been corrected! Courcelles (talk) 20:15, 3 December 2018 (UTC)